Let me get this straight. Here is an example in a two hundered point game. Say my white queen succesfully made a mind control attack on bullseye. That is one action out of my two. Then I had bullseye attack hercules. Would that be my second action out of my alloted two or does the action with bullseye not count against me. If some of u could help me with this it would be much appritiated.

Controlling the bullseye to do an actions counts as White Queen's action. It is not one of your two actions in a 200 point game.

and what happens whe a mandarin makes a critical hit on dd . can he still super sense it?

Yep, DD still gets to roll for Super Senses even though Mandarin rolled a critical success (rolled as 12).

i also have a mind control question.
white queen wants to MC klaw to attack braniac 13, but klaw is out of range. so, white queen mcs braniac 13, then forces him to mc klaw. klaw attacks braniac 13 for 3 clicks (reduced by imperv). is that legal?

Actually, no because Brainiac would be "friendly" to klaw at the time.

Angelofhate is correct. An MCing figure's action doesn't end until the MCed figure's action has ended as well. So White Queen's action isn't over until Brainiac is finished, and Brainiac isn't finished until Klaw is finished.

This means that Klaw and Brainiac are friendly figures when Klaw makes his attack, and so Brainiac cannot be the target.