THis deck is ment to be in a free fer all game not a one on one match to controle all of your opponents I do not own all of these cards but do know that i will be geting them soon and there effects

Tribute Monsters
3x Peritioner of Darkness- This card has one perpose your opponents have monster they want to attack but you decide who and what they attack and none of it is you.
1x Jinzo
1x Spell Canceler

Monsters
1x Fiber Jar Look at its text in the way my friends play by the text rules it means everone puts there cards back but only two players draw five you and one other.
1xCyber Jar
1x Morphing Jar #2
3x Susuke Sameri
3x Mystical Sowrds Men Lv2 This along with my sameri destroy peski flip effects.
3x Swarm of Scarabs
3x Swarm of Locust
3x Stealth Bird
2x Des Locuda This comes in handy with Light of Intervention because it puts itself in face down defence mode later

Magic
3x Stumbling

Trap
3x Light of Intervention once you get this out you dont have to worry about flib effects and your sameri and sowrds men are not needed
3x Fairy Box every attack but yours is effected by this card
3x Ordeal of a Traveler every attack is effected by this card except for yours
3x Magic Jamer For thouse pesky magic cards

only use Jinzo when Partioner of Darkness is on the field so any ideas to improve it. or is there something rong with it

A few things --

1. Way too many trib mons. I'd say drop one or two Patricians, or one Patrician and Spell Cancellor.

2. A lot of your mons are tiny and weak. Even in a free-for-all with Patrician on the field, those little mons are not gonna be reliable. While I'm at it, I'd say you have way too many mons period. Without enough spell cards, this deck is gonna be kind of slow.

3. Take out your three Magic Jammers. It's not always necessary to negate spells.

alirght how about this -3 Magic Jamer + 3 Ake of despair
- 3 Susuke Sameri for +3 Collected Power there are tons of equip cards in free fer alls -3 Mystical Swordsmen Lv 2 for 3 Goblin Attack Force i cant get rid of any of the tribute monsters because the Partiteners in a free for all are the most valuble card you could have because you choose who attacks who if youre opponent chooses to attack with his Blindly Loayal Gobilin I could make it attack my other opponents Blue Eyes White Dragon equiped with mage power and mega morph to end the duel for my first opponent and then when me and some one else is left i have them attack my weeker monsters until they run out off cards because I always let the person who used the most drawing power to go last oh yea that reminds me to add one sword of the deep seated in place of a Ake of Despair. Plus Jinzo and Spell Cancelr when put by Particaner stop all there magic and traps usualy foring them to run out of cards i have used this for a wile now in free fer alls. But i do thank you my monsters where a little week