I realize that I've posted this deck several times in different variations, but now that I've completed it I wanted to show it off. Here it is! The Spellcaster Beatdown! I'm only looking for ratings here. If you feel obligated to make fixes go ahead, but I'm not neccesarily looking for them. Just want to know what you all think of the deck.

Deck Name: The Crimson Magician's Fury
Sleeves: Crimson (duh)
Win/Loss Record since Completion: 5 Wins/0 Losses/1 Ties

Monsters:
1 Jinzo
3 Gemini Elf
1 Injection Fairy Lily
1 Dark Magician
1 Chaos Command Magician
1 Breaker the Magical Warrior
3 Skilled Dark Magician
3 Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer
2 D. D. Warrior Lady
1 Cyber Jar

Total Monsters: 17

Spell Cards:
1 Change of Heart
2 Enemy Controller
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Premature Burial
1 Snatch Steal
1 Heavy Storm
2 Nobleman of Crossout
1 Painful Choice
1 Scapegoat
1 Swords of Revealing Light
2 Book of Moon
1 Pot of Greed
2 Smashing Ground

Total Spells: 17

Trap Cards:
1 Magic Cylinder
1 Ring of Destruction
1 Call of the Haunted
1 Torrential Tribute
2 Compulsory Evacuation Device

Total Trap Cards: 6

Total Cards: 40




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Nice deck. I'm usually a burner duelist, but lately, I'm been exploring the spellcaster scene, and this is a 9.5/10. But would you consider dark magician of chaos? I have a bias towards it and I thought it might also fit in this deck, maybe replacing dark magician?

-1 Dark Magician
-1 Nobleman

+1 Magical Marrionette
+1 Card Destruction (I just happen to like this card alot =P)

8.8/10. I suggest Marrionette over DM because Marrionette is generally a more flexible monster. The SDMs can still be okay by themselves.

My "Creation Force" deck could use some help, por favor.