Ok............

]~[16]~[ ~`;Monsters;`~ ]~[16]~[

~[1]~Magician of Faith~[1]~
~[1]~Magic Scientist~[1]~
~[3]~DD Warrior Lady~[3]~
~[2]~Pitch-Black Warwolve~[2]~
~[1]~Fiber Jar~[1]~
~[3]~Berserk Gorilla~[3]~
~[1]~Spirit Reaper~[1]~
~[2]~Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer~[2]~
~[1]~Tribe-Infecting Virus~[1]~
~[1]~Breaker the Magical Warrior~[1]~


]~[17]~[ ~`;Magic;`~ ]~[17]~[

~[1]~Change of Heart~[1]~
~[1]~Pot of Greed~[1]~
~[1]~Swords of Revealing Light~[1]~
~[2]~Nobleman of Crossout~[2]~
~[1]~Scapegoat~[1]~(Soon Two)
~[2]~Giant Trunade~[2]~
~[1]~Creature Swap~[1]~
~[1]~Mystical Space Typhoon~[1]~
~[2]~Smashing Ground~[2]~
~[2]~Book of Moon~[2]~
~[1]~Snatch Steal~[1]~
~[1]~Card Destruction~[1]~
~[1]~Premature Burial~[1]~

]~[7]~[ ~`;Trap's;`~ ]~[7]~[

~[3]~Sakuretsu Armor~[3]~
~[2]~Dust Tornado~[2]~
~[1]~Call of the Haunted~[1]~
~[1]~Ring of Destruction~[1]~


]~[15]~[ ~`;Side-Deck;`~ ]~[15]~[

~[2]~Electric Snake~[2]~
~[2]~Blade Knight~[2]~
~[1]~Magician of Faith~[1]~
~[3]~Night Assailant~[3]~
~[2]~Raigeki Break~[2]~
~[2]~Waboku~[2]~
~[2]~Magic Drain~[2]~
~[1]~Solemn Judgement~[1]~

Come on,I need help............................................

nice, only suggestions...

- 1 warwolf
+ jinzo

- 2 raigeki break
+ heavy storm
+ torrential tribute

- 2 magic drain
+ ring of destruction
+ the forceful sentry

- card destruction
+ confiscation

- 3 sak armor
+ 3 bottomless trap hole

not bad...8/10.

only thing i see is u need 2-3 more monsters. i can see this deck stuck without drawing any monsters, but other than that it looks good.
and yes,
- 1 or 2 sak armor
+ 1 or 2 bottomless t holes, i run 1 and its fun...

Thanx Ward and DarkMagwalt,I'll try your ideas.............BTW,do you think this deck would do good at Georgia Regionals?

ill agree with ward, you'll need 2-3 more monsters. but except that nice deck 8/10

Ok,thanx ti_jo,I rated your deck to,but I didn't pay attention on my fixes so I'll fix it...........ti_jo,I can't find your deck so can you link me to you plz......

Sorry,I tried to Edit and hit Quote.....................=\