Hey people can you please fix/rate my new dark magician deck it needs some work because i am going to try it out in the regionals. Well here it is.

40 card deck

Tributes: (5)
X3 DaRk MaGiCiAn
X1 DaRk MaGiCiAn Of ChAoS
X1 DaRk MaGiCiAn GiRl

Non Tributes: (13)
X3 SkIlLeD DaRk MaGiCiAn
X2 ApPrEnTiCe MaGiCiAn
X2 OlD ViNdIcTiVe MaGiCiAn
X1 MaGiCiAn Of FaItH
X1 TrIbE InFeCtInG ViRuS
X1 FiBeR JaR
X1 MaGiCaL ScIeNtIsT
X1 InJeCtIoN FaIrY LiLy
X1 BrEaKeR ThE MaGiCaL WaRrIoR
X1 SiNiStEr SeRpEnT

Magics/Spells: (16)
X2 BoOk Of MoOn
X1 HeAvY StOrM
X1 PaInFuL ChOiCe
X1 SwArDs Of ReVeAlInG LiGhT
X1 ScApEgOaT
X1 ChAnGe Of HeArT
X1 PrEmAtUrE BuRiAl
X1 SnAtCh StEaL
X1 PoT Of GrEeD
X1 ReAsOnInG
X1 NoBlEmAn Of CrOsSoUt
X1 MyStIcAl SpAcE TyPhOoN
X1 SmAsHiNg GrOuNd
X1 CrEaTuRe SwAp
X1 MoNsTeR ReInCaRnAtIoN

Traps: (6)
X2 DuSt ToRnAdO
X1 RiNg Of DeStRuCtIoN
X1 CaLl Of ThE HaUnTeD
X1 ToRrEnTiAl TrIbUtE

Fusions:
X1 ThOuSeNd-EyEs ReStRiCt
X1 DaRk BlAdE ThE DrAgOn KnIgHt
X2 FiEnD SkUlL DrAgOn
X1 SaNwItCh ( I need another)

So there is my deck can you please Rate/Fix This deck because i want to take it to the regionals

BUMP 18 views and no posts. I really need some help on this deck.

- Inect Fairy lily
+ Monster Gate

Or
-Injection Farly Lily
- Reasoning

+ 2 Monster gate

cant think of anything else

(would you take a look at mine, it is in my sig)

thanks but i think i am going to keep my lily because of attack power so when i attack direcly with her she will be 3400!!! Any other rate/fix

Since you are runnin some smaller monster and Scapegoats I would still say run one or two Monater Gates, they are good

i think gemini elfs are good thet are spellcasters
and why does evry1 have soooo less traps. 15 monsters 5 high stars with 10 magic and traps seems fine to me

your telling me when i activate reasoning and when i draw scapegoat i summon them on the fiels?

and people have less traps because traps only help at times and magics help out more i think.

that is not what I am saying, I am saying that Monster gate need a tribute to use, so since you use scapegoat you can use one of them as the tribute, Monster gate in Similar to Reason, but not exactly

-1 Book of Moon
+ Diffusion Wave Motion / Dark magic attack

-1 Old Vindictive Magician
+1 Double Coston

-1 Smashing ground
+ Double Spell / Hammershot

so monster gate could get any monster that i draw first and special summon it.



thanks reese for the help but i am trying not to use like dark magic attacks. i have 2 of them. but i dont use them.

any other rate/fixes

thats it, but if you come across a special summon only monster (I don't think you are running any) it goes to the graveyard and you keep going till you come to a non special summon only monster (where as with Reasoning if you come up with a special summon only monster it goes to the graveyrad and the effect ends) and with monster gate you don't need your opponate to say a Level (which can be annoying if they guess right)

- 1 Dark Magician (3 is VERY overkill, 2 is plenty)
- 1 Monster Reincarnation (this card is very overrated, and you'll find yourself wishing you drew something else more often than not)
- 1 Judgment of Anubis (you don't run enough continuous spells and traps that you're going to need it, it will help you tremendously to put in something else)

+1 Monster Gate (as previously suggested)
+1 Double Coston (if you're not going to run Reasoning and Monster Gate, then you need to tribute summon those big guns, and Double Coston is the way to do it)
+1 Magic Cylinder

only one question. keepin it short and sweet -- why???

In order to even have a shot, you need much much more speed...

Use a core of 10-12 Monsters. Abuse Reasoning + Gate. 3 of each. Have fun.

Dark Magician of Chaos
Dark Magician Girl
Dark Magician Girl
Dark Magician Girl
Dark Magician
Dark Magician
Dark Magician
Skilled Dark Magician
Skilled Dark Magician
Skilled Dark Magician

Would Probably be best.

Also, I would run a Sage's Stone if you have it, and what DAxplosion said would be fun too