aswan apparition/solemn judgement or drop off
tsukuyomi/mask of darkness/solemn judgement or drop off
tsukuyomi/magician of faith/sorl

i think i may try these fixes:
-1 book of moon
-1 confiscation
-1 magic drain

+1 card destruction
+1 painful choice
+1 shallow grave
what do u think?

2-mystic tomato
3-aswan apparition
3-mask of darkness
3-tsukuyomi
2-magician of faith
2-ddwl
1-shining angel
1-breaker
1-tribe

3-book of moon
2-nobleman of crossout
1-sorl
1-confiscation
1-forceful sentry
1-snatch steal
1-pot of greed
1-mst
1-heavy storm
1-change of heart

3-drop off
3-solemn judgment
3-magic drain

thats my first attempt at a combo lockdown deck

golden rule

Eh, Tsukuyomi is supposed to be in here right?

I think this deck could use a bit of stall, which brings to mind that maybe you could also try the Tsukuyomi/MoF/SoRL combo, which is also supposed to be pretty nice.

That's funny, one of your lockdown combos need Tsukuyomi, but it' not in here. Anyway.....

-3 Spirit Reaper
+2 Tsukuyomi
+1 Don Zaloog

Otherwise, looks great.

oh dude
thanks for pointing that out
i was thinking about a zombie deck im making and put spirit reaper down instead of tsukuyomi

one other idea

Aswan + demotion + opti-camoflauge (ebil trappage)

by the time im doing damage with aswan my field should be cleared so i dont really need the opti camouflage plus that combo sounds like u could find a really good monster to use it on that could abuse the affect

ok i r/f your deck
i also added the magician of faith/sorl/tsukuyomi combo

I'll give this deck an 8/10. I don't really see anything wrong with it. Except maybe the 7 tools of the bandit. With 3 solomn judgments your lifepoints might be pretty low by then right?

yeah you r right
i just threw it in there for more negation
how about i replace it with another mystic tomato

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not bad but try taking out 2 of the solumn judgments and adding a reload for some hand control and a fusilier dragon since you have those 3 books of moon(you could add a card destruction as well but with this deck, I wouldn't recommend it) 8/10 good job.

take out a crossout and add in painful choice, this should get drop off in the gy quicker in case u have a set mod and tsukuyomi in ur hand...i would also suggest u use time seals over the drop offs..harder to pull but this way neither u or ur opponent deckout

i forgot about painful choice and card destruction

what do u think about adding in shallow grave?