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Here's an awesome Exodia deck I spent a while making:

Monsters x20
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Cyber Jar
Des Feral Imp x3
Des Lacooda x3
Exodia The Forbidden One
Neko Mane King
Left Arm of The Forbidden One
Left Leg of The Forbidden One
Magician of Faith x3
Right Arm of The Forbidden One
Right Leg of The Forbidden One
Royal Magical Library
Spear Cretin x3

Spells x14
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The Dark Door
Dark Factory of Mass Production x2
Miracle Dig x2
Painful Choice
Pot of Greed
Scapegoat x3
The Shallow Grave x3
Swords of Revealing Light

Traps x6
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A Feint Plan x3
Jar of Greed x3

The way this deck works is as follows:
The main strategy of course is to draw cards and summon the five pieces of Exodia, but there is more to it. I'll start in alphabetical order and go down the line of what each card is used for.

Cyber Jar: do not use effect until you have Exodia The Forbidden One in your hand, used to get 5 new cards.
Dark Factory of Mass Production: use to bring back any exodia pieces from your graveyard to your hand
Des Feral Imp: used to bring any exodia pieces from your graveyard to your deck
(Des Lacooda and notes below for it is the main strategy PLEASE READ CAREFULLY)
Des Lacooda: try to use with Swords of Revealing Light , or The Shallow Grave to bring them back, or A Feint Plan preventing your opponent from attacking them. Use Magician of Faith to keep getting back The Shallow Grave, use Spear Cretin to keep gettig back Magician of Faith, you will hopefully draw 3 cards each turn
A Feint Plan: used so your opponent cannot attack Des Lacooda, Magician of Faith, Spear Cretin or any other face down monsters
Magician of Faith: used to get back The Shallow Grave to keep bringing back Des Lacooda(s) to draw cards
Miracle Dig: used to bring back any exodia pieces that were removed to your graveyard
Painful Choice: use it to get three exodia pieces other than the head, Magician of Faith, and The Shallow Grave, after the exodia pieces go to the graveyard use Dark Factory of Mass Production to bring them to your hand
The Shallow Grave: try to use to bring back Des Lacooda
Spear Cretin: used to bring back Magician of Faith, Des Lacooda, or another Spear Cretin

Hope you guys like the deck, try it out, leave feedback, and tell me if there was anything wrong with it. (I do know it could use more cards that negate or destroy magic or trap cards)

What do you guys think of this deck? Are there any suggestions to make this deck any better?