This my beatdown deck, its been really sucessful, but could someone rate it for me? THX!

Tributes:
Blue eyes white dragon x1
Guardian Angel Joan
Zaborg the thunder monarch
Mobius the frost monarch
Thestalos the firestorm monarch

Non-tributes:
Berserk gorilla x3
Luster dragon x3
archfiend soldier x2
mad dog of darkness x1
spear dragon x1
dragon dwelling in the cave x1
gagagigo x1
twin headed behemoth x1
ninja grandmaster sasuke x1
kaiser sea horse x1

Magic:
Stamping destruction x2
mst
scapegoat
offerings to the doomed
tribute to the doomed
s. of revealing light
premature burial
heavy storm
dragons gunfire
dark factory of mass production
graceful charity
nobleman of crossout

Traps:
trap jammer x2
call of the haunted
magic drain
raigeki break
dust tornado
Curse of royal

no takers, i know its not perfect, please give me some advice here.

Well if your running beatdown you need to make it focused, lets set this up for April 1st.

Tributes [2]
[1] Jinzo
[1] Mobius the Frost Monarch

Non-Tribute [15]
[3] Berserk Gorilla
[3] Blade Knight
[2] Luster Dragon
[2] Spear Dragon
[1] Injection Fairy Lilly
[1] D.D. Warrior Lady
[1] Cyber Jar
[1] Tribe Infecting Virus
[1] Sinister Serpent

Magic [17]
[2] Nobleman of Crossout
[2] Fissure
[2] Messanger of Peace
[1] Pot of Greed
[1] Graceful Charity
[1] Heavy Storm
[1] Lightning Vortex
[1] Premature Burial
[1] Swords of Revealing Light
[1] Swords of Concealing Light
[1] Scapegoat
[1] Mage Power
[1] United We Stand
[1] Mystical Space Typhoon

Trap [6]
Call of the Haunted
Ring of Destruction
Torrential Tribute
Mirror Force
Bottomless Trap Hole
Magic Drain

If you have any questions about this version of the deck, just pm me