Ok, I've been playtesting. These are the changes I have made and here are my concerns:
-Is Chiron really worth it? I like him, but I am not sure about him.
-Airknight Parsath - Him instead of Mobius? I think this is a good move if Chiron works out. Adds some light.
-Where does Mirror Force go? I think it's fine without it, but my friends tell me I am crazy. But think about it, mirror force is only good if your opponent is willing to attack you when you have a s/t set.
-Lightning Vortex, better than hammer shot? Let me know.
-Bait Doll. I am thinking about playing it, but am worried about its effectiveness.

Main Deck: 42 Cards
1 Airknight Parshath
1 Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the Beginning
2 Blade Knight
1 Chiron the Mage
1 Command Knight
1 Cyber Jar
1 D. D. Assailant
1 D. D. Warrior Lady
1 Exiled Force
1 Jinzo
1 Magician of Faith
1 Marauding Captain
2 Mataza the Zapper
1 Sangan
1 Sinister Serpent
1 Tribe-Infecting Virus

1 Delinquent Duo
1 Enemy Controller
1 Graceful Charity
1 Hammer Shot
1 Heavy Storm
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
2 Nobleman of Crossout
1 Pot of Greed
1 Premature Burial
2 Reinforcement of the Army
1 Scapegoat
1 Snatch Steal
1 Swords of Revealing Light
2 The Warrior Returning Alive
1 United We Stand

1 Call Of The Haunted
1 Ceasefire
1 Ring of Destruction
2 Spell Shield Type-8
1 Torrential Tribute

Sidedeck:
2 Book of Moon
2 Divine Wrath
2 Dust Tornado
2 Emergency Provisions
2 Fusion Sword Murasame Blade
2 Kinetic Soldier
1 Mobius the Frost Monarch
2 Pikeru's Circle of Enchantment