If you rate and fix mine I would be honoured to do the same for you.

Monsters 16

Jinzo
Breaker the magical warrior
Sangan
D.D. warrior lady
Exiled force
Tribe infecting virus
Sinister Serpent
Lily Injection Fairy Lily
Kycoo The Ghost Destroyer
Kycoo The Ghost Destroyer
D.D. assaliant
D.D. assaliant
D.D. assaliant
Berserk Gorilla
Berserk Gorilla
Berserk Gorilla


Magic 18

Premature burial
Delinquent Duo
Heavy storm
Graceful charity
MST
Swords Of Revealing Light
Pot of greed
Snatch steal
Creature Swap
Scapegoat
Scapegoat
Nobleman of crossout
Nobleman of crossout
Smashing ground
Smashing ground
Book of moon
Book of moon
Book of moon


Traps 6

Call of the haunted
Torrential tribute
Ring of destruction
Mirror force
Bottomless traphole
Bottomless traphole

It look pretty solid to me

here is my deck
http://yugiohrealms.com/forum/showthread.php?t=417961

Yeah the deck looks really good. I like the maxing out on books. The only thing I would change is to add in one reinforcements of the army since you are running 5 warriors. It could add a bit more speed too. Maybe you could try it over one nobleman of crossout (I don't know how saturated your meta is w/ flips though).

Can you check out my deck in the signature? Thanks.