I traded for this deck, hope i did good.

Monsters:
3x Insect Knight
3x Luster Dragon #2
3x Mad Dog of Darkness
3x Archfiend Soldier
3x Gemini Elf
1x Guardian Sphinx
1x Blue Eyes White Dragon

Magic Cards:
1x Monster Reborn
2x Spell Absorption
1x Meteor Of Destruction
1x Snatch Steal
2x Two-Man Cell Battle
1x Pot of Greed
1x Premature Burial
1x Axe of Despair
1x Lightning Vortex
1x Heavy Storm
1x United We Stand
1x Delta Attacker
1x Feather of the Phoenix
1x Dark Factory of Mass Production
1x Graceful Charity

Trap Cards:
2x Shadow Spell
1x Covering Fire
1x Torrential Tribute
1x Soul Resurrection
1x Call of the Haunted
1x Magic Cylinder
1x Jar of Greed
1x Negate Attack

please rate...

-yomi

hmm...

-Monster Reborn (banned for ever and ever)
-Meteor Destruction
-Delta Attacker (you're not going to get it off)
-Spell Absorption
-Feather of the Phoenix
-Shadow Spell
-Soul Ressurection
-Covering Fire
-Jar of Greed
-Negate Attack

+2x Heart of the Underdog
+1x Dark Factory of Mass Production
+2x Skill Drain
+1x Mystical Space Typhoon
+1x Dust Tornado



That brings you down to 40 cards and fixes up your large amount of traps. It also added some magic/trap removal(beatdown's biggest fear) and added some theme cards like heart of the underdog.

after fixes 8.8/10

mind checking my decks out? links in the sig ty