Ok I am taking a bit of a break from my Magnet Warrior Deck and have decided to try out a dragon deck until i can make the Cyberstien OTK(i have wanted one since Eternal Duelist Soul, many moons ago). I of course bought a Dragon Structure deck but of course I made changes to it, and i sincerly hope that you-the reader enjoy reviewing. Also if u want me to return the favor and rate ur deck PLEASE tell me so in your review and i will rate your deck.
One more thing this deck uses 3 Japanese cards that are not relased in USA yet so i hope u dont mind reviewg the deck with the Japanese cards. Here are the "rough" translations

1) Crush Card (Deck Destruction Virus of Death )
-This is a pretty well know card and I should not have to translate the effect, if I must then please let me know and i will

2) Devil King Dragon - Vandargaron
Dark/Dragon/8/2800/2500
Whenever a card that opponent activate is negate by a Counter Trap, this card can be special summon from your hand. When this card is successfully special summon this way, one of the following effects would be activate depends on the type of the card negated.
- Magic: Do 1500 damages to your opponent
- Trap: Destroy a card on opponent's field.
- Effect Monster: Choose a monster in your Graveyard and special summon it onto your field

Know for the actual deck

MONS: 22 altogthere

REBDchick x2
REBD x2
REDD
Devil King Dragon-Vandargon x1 ( i am thinking 2-maybe ?__?)
Giant Germ x3
Mirage Dragon
Masked Dragon x3
Cyber Jar
Spirt Ryu
Armed Dragon Level 3 x 3
Armed Dragon Level 5 x2
Armed Dragon Level 7 x2

SPELLS: 14 altogthere

POGD
Gracful Charity
Stamping Destruction x 2
Heavy Storm
Level Up x 2
The Graveyard in the 4th dimension (a little iffy on this card )
SORL
Card Destruciton
Super Rejuvenation
Premature Burial
Snatch Steal
Creature Swap (iffy on tis too-but usually not to bad)

TRAPS : 7 altogthere
Solemn Judgement x2
Crush Card
ROD
Mirror Force
Burst Breath
Compulsary Evaction Device

That should be 43 cards altogthere, so please help the deck out i enjoy using it and would prolly more so if the deck was given some critques-and i will gladly return the favor but u must indicate that you want me to review the deck. Enjoy people

First off, you said three, but only mentioned two...
Now, let me just verify the effects of the Japanese Cards, which will probably appear in the next set if you have them already.

Crush Card: You must tribute 1 DARK type monster on your side of the field to activate this card. Any monster card with an ATK of 1500 or more on your opponent's side of the field, in your opponent's hand, or drawn by your opponent for you opponent's next 3 turns are automaticly destroyed. (This is what I remember the effect being, work with me here!)

Devil King Dragon - Vandagaron: Dark/Dragon/Effect/Level 8/ATK 2800/DEF 2500 -- If a card played by your opponent is negated and destroyed by a Counter Trap card, this monster can be Special Summoned from your hand. You may activate the following effects when this monster is successfully Special Summoned in this way. If the card negated is a Spell card, inflict 1500 points of direct damage to your opponent's Life Points. If the card negated is a trap card, destroy 1 card on your opponent' side of the field. If the card negated is an effect monster, you may select 1 monster in your Graveyard and Special Summon it to the field.

The monster mentioned seems unlikely, since it was tough for me to rewrite your translation of its effect in pure words. Because I cannot be sure of your honesty and/or integrity, I cannnot give you a specific enough rating, nor adjust your deck based on the strategy presented with Vandagaron. Please verify said cards with me via PM; if applicable, please provide a scanned photo of the cards as well.

AeroGP i did send u a pm but in case u did not recive it here it is again:

You are correct about the Crush card except that you have to tribute a dark type monster on your side of the field with an attack with 1000 or less, then the rest of ur transaliton is correct.

As for Devil King Dragon-Vandragon that is a real card-relased in the Shoen Jump in Japan, so there is no telling when it will be relased in America. I got it someone's sig in the japanse forums it is like "Baron's website or something, but i assure u it is a REAL card and the effects listed are the correct ones.

Again I strongly beleive that Devil King Dragon -Vandragon is a real card.

a pretty sweet deck idea u difinatley wanna run magic drains though they dont eat up ur life points as much as the solem judgements do plus u take a magic card away from ur opponent if not they still discard a card from there hand and not only that but as long as u conter a spell from ur opponent with it regardless if they discard to still get the spell u still get to summon ur dragon with his effect wow a wicked combo try that other wise great deck 9/10

please rate my xyz deck i need help for regionals which is right around the corner

and the effect of crush card is u must tribute a monster with 1000 points attack or less thats dark so u may want to add another red eyes black chick to the mix

Hmm... Since your deck is focused on bringing out Vandagaron, I suppose you should do this:

- Creature Swap
- Cumpulsory

+ Snatch Steal
+ COTH
+ Premature Burial

This will allow you to maintain Vandagaron's reign on the field. 8.5/10. I would like to see some battles with Vandagaron in use; it seems like a really good card. It could be your theme cards that sets you appart from everyone else!

Thankyou Jeffthebear and AeroGp-ill get rite around to helping your decks out. And i did add in COTH and Premature-i just forgot to mention it in deck also i added a mystic tomato in -just to yank out those dark monsters. And i did take out most of the cards that you both suggested. Finally I will stick with my Solemn Judgements for I simply love being able to negate ANYTHING and I do not mind throwing around my LP in order to acheive victory-it makes the duel more interseting I think, haha.

Thanks again-u all have restored my faith in the deck depot.-THANKS

Also since Vandragon is not relased in America yet he is just a "I will have You one day, very soon" card. Hopefully he will be realsed in America soon, but since he was recently relased in Japan, I doubt it =(