Here it is..thoughts, comments, etc would be appreciated.

MONSTERS 17
Des Wombat x3
Dice Jar x2
MoF x2
Rescue Cat x2
Tsukuyomi x2
Stealth Bird x2
Behemouth King of All Animals
Cyber Jar
Morphing Jar
Spirit Reaper

SPELLS 17
Dark Snake Syndrome x3
LLAB x2
MoP x2
WMC x2
Book of Moon x2
Reload x2
Pot GC
Scapegoat
Premature
MST

TRAPS 6
Gravity Bind x2
Waboku x2
Ring of Destruction
Call of the Haunted

It's kind of a burn deck, not true Des Wombat...that'd be tough to make. Well, with Wombat, it kind of has to be a burn deck...LOL.

Thanks...

i thought of making a deck almost exactly like this. the only thing i can say is add in another book of moon (to keep des wombat alive after rescue catting him out)

Or you could consider Dimensionhole, but book of moon is probably more versatile. ill give it a 9.0 because of its originality and not chaos-ness, and it's striking resemblance to the deck i wanted to make.

btw, mind fixing deck in sig? thanks

mmmpie: Thanks...I did comment on your deck a while ago...LOL.

"If you can't beat em', use em' against em' in a deck." I always say. Well, I dont' but I wish I did. Have you considered trying out a couple of Barrel Behind the Door or trap of board eraser? Just for those times when you don't have the Wombat on the field. You should also try out a couple of mask of darkness. With tsukuyomi and your book of moons (which Btw, I agree with mmmpie that you should add another) you can use it every turn. Get back Ring for constant damage to your opponent and his monsters. Get back BBtD for reflecting damage from dark snake. Or even get back Trap of Board eraser to negate DSS damage and constantly deplete your opponent's hand. I you do use BBtD, I suggest you add in a sinister serpent as well.

It's a shame you can't use BBtD with Dice Jar anymore but it's still a good card. If you are really interested in playing the odds, add a couple of desert sunlight or book of taiyou in your deck along with a third dice jar. Now watch the magic as Tsuku, book of moon, taiyou, and desert sunlight work together to flip Dice jar over and over in the same turn. If you're lucky you could very well KO your opponent this way. Just make sure you have Des Wombat on the field just in case you're not so lucky.

One more not so coherent suggestion for you. The total Des Wombat/Dark snake syndrome deck. Based solely upon getting des wombat out with a protected dark snake. Along with your rescue cats and Des wombats add in Magical Merchants, Monster Reincarnation and Magic Reflectors. Then just stall your azz off. It'll work kind of like a final countdown deck. Get DSS and Des Wombat out and protect them both and your lp. Although it should take much less time to win. Let's see, 200, 400, 800, 1600, 3200, 6400... By turn six the opponent would be finished. However, if you got rid of your des wombat on turn 4 and BBtd'ed on turn 5 he'd be dead a turn sooner. Or better yet, you run 3 WMCs concurrently forcing your opponent to have to make a choice on what to remove, DSS, WMC, or your stall card. Very deadly. Take that into a deul along with ROD, Magic Cylinders, stealth bird and the like and you have a very deadly, very suprising deck. Probably still lose to Chaos though, sigh...

I notice I haven't made any concrete suggestions. Oh well, take whatever you can from my rambling and try to apply it to your deck. Also, If you find the time, R/F the deck in my signature. Coincidentally, it's a burn deck too. Small world huh?
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Gamemaster: Thanks for the insight. I may opt for some of your choice, MoD, Book, Monster Reincarnation (Behemouth option), another Dice jar...nice...thanks.

Sweet deck, I like it a lot. I pretty much agree with all the other fixes, just had to say very creative.

Nicely done.

I think added on to my previous fixes a magic reflector could keep either stall or snake syndrome alive an extra few turns... ive always wanted to use that card

Ok, everyone, thanks for the suggestions. Here is a revised edition of it:

MONSTERS 17
Des Wombat x3
Dice Jar x2
MoF x2
Rescue Cat x2
Tsukuyomi x2
Stealth Bird x2
Cyber Jar
Morphing Jar
Mask of Darkness
Behemouth King of All Animals

SPELLS 17
Dark Snake Syndrome x3
Book of Moon x3
LLAB x2
MoP x2
WMC x2
Pot
GC
Scapegoat
Premature Burial
SoRL

TRAPS 8
Gravity Bind x2
Waboku x2
Dessert Sunlight x2
Ring of Destruction
Call of the Haunted

So what about these changes now? Not sure if I agree with BBtD, doesn't work with DSS anymore...thanks.

Still looking to see if this deck is tourny worthy....advice any 1?

It's about time someone made this deck, well done!!

Here's a couple of things to consider. If your opponent brings out a Wombat of his own, you're in trouble. I would at least side deck a pair of Lava Golems.

You don't want something to happen to your Wombat around the 5th or 6th turn that DDS has been on the field without having a backup plan. I would drop the Waboku's for HLB's.

I would drop the BKoAA for a less situational Monster Reincarnation. Would you rather give up a card on your field or in your hand for that beast monster. Since you won't be doing much attacking with all your stall the fact that you have a big monster is basically irrelevant.

To cusion the blows from my last two suggestions, I would add in both Sinister Serpent and a pair of Night Assailant. Serpent should probably be in there anyway as a self-replacing wall. Night Assailant's are amazing at getting back MoF. Combined with Tsuki, you have the potential to draw a lot of cards. Plus, you have a lot of other Flip Effect monster to abuse NA with.

I would take out Cyber Jar. This is more of a personal perference, but giving 5 cards to your oppopent = very very bad. At least Morphing Jar you can time so that you get some advantage out of it.

-Behemoth King of All Animals
-Cyber Jar
-Dice Jar (x1)
-Book of Taiyou
-Waboku (x2)

+Sinister Serpent
+Night Assailant (x2)
+Monster Reincarnation
+Hallowed Life Barrier (x2)

Nice deck.

ZaQ777: Well, I agree with some of your ideas:
-Behemoth King of All Animals
-Dice Jar (x1)
-Book of Taiyou
+Sinister Serpent
+Monster Reincarnation

I can't say I agree with HLB...? Why? Wabokus are to keep Des Wombat on the field. Not sure why the Assialants, I don't do much discarding. Personally, CYber Jar is great for me, I get to see what my opponent has and plan accordingly. I will try those chages, thanks.