Please give my your opinoin on this deck, the deck may not be original, but I wanted to see how well I could build one, I never built this type of deck before. Most Suggestions are welcome but please I won't be using BLS - EOTB or using a 40 card deck. I have never had much success with a 40 card deck, Thank you for your time. This is an update to a deck I have posted before but, can't post on since I would be double posting.


Name: Beatdown Assualt
Format: Advance
Main Deck: 42(M: 18/S: 17/T: 7)
Side Deck: 15(M: 5/S: 5/T: 5)
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Main Deck: 42
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Tribute Monsters: 3
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1x [MC1-EN006]Dark Ruler Ha Des
1x [DB1-EN067]Jinzo
1x [AST-022]Blowback Dragon

Non-Tribute Monsters: 15
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3x [IOC-013]Berserk Gorilla
2x [WC4-003]Slate Warrior
1x [SDD-002]Sinister Serpent
1x [MFC-071]Breaker the Magical Warrior
1x [DBT-EN002]D. D. Assailant
1x [DCR-027]D. D. Warrior Lady
1x [MFC-076]Tribe-Infecting Virus
1x [LOD-023]Exiled Force
1x [LON-062]Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer
1x [TP5-EN006]Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer
1x [DB1-EN043]Cyber Jar
1x [MRD-036]Magician of Faith

Spells: 17
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2x [PGD-035]Book of Moon
2x [IOC-093]Smashing Ground
1x [FET-EN040]Lightning Vortex
1x [LOD-081]Creature Swap
1x [PSV-037]Premature Burial
1x [MRL-036]Snatch Steal
1x [MRL-047]Mystical Space Typhoon
1x [TLM-EN038]Brain Control
1x [DB1-EN024]Delinquent Duo
1x [DB1-EN129]Swords of Revealing Light
1x [SDJ-041]Scapegoat
1x [SDP-040]Graceful Charity
1x [PSV-034]Nobleman of Crossout
1x [MRD-142]Heavy Storm
1x [LOB-119]Pot of Greed

Traps: 7
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1x [DB1-EN228]Torrential Tribute
1x [IOC-SE3]Ring of Destruction
1x [MRD-138]Mirror Force
1x [PSV-012]Call of the Haunted
1x [PSV-011]Dust Tornado
1x [LOD-092]Bottomless Trap Hole
1x [DCR-102]Sakuretsu Armor

Side Deck: 15
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2x [SOD-EN060]Hallowed Life Barrier
1x [LOD-100]Injection Fairy Lily
1x [WC4-003]Slate Warrior
1x [SOD-EN022]Mobius the Frost Monarch
1x [MRD-036]Magician of Faith
1x [SD4-EN012]Mobius the Frost Monarch
1x [LON-049]United We Stand
1x [LON-050]Mage Power
1x [DB1-EN032]Giant Trunade
1x [SD2-EN020]Creature Swap
1x [SD1-EN012]Nobleman of Crossout
1x [PCY-001]Windstorm of Etaqua
1x [PSV-030]Ceasefire
1x [DB1-EN075]Dust Tornado

I have a lot of experience with beat downs and i have to say that if this is a beatdown then why are all of your equips side decked, and where's axe of despair? You might also want to main deck your second nobleman of crossout and you might want to put in a susuke samurai or two in order to have more protection against Flip effect monsters plus they can also be combined with book of moon. Oh you should also add in a Tsukuyomi(same effect as book of moon, but can be used repeatedly since she's a spirit monster), another card you should put in is Royal command since you only have 4 flip effect monsters in your deck.
Hope i helped a little.
p.s. you have three of my favorite six star monsters in here :)