Rate/Fix this deck and I will return the favor.

Main Deck(42)

Monsters(16)

1x Jinzo
1x Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV6
1x Spirit Reaper
1x Sinister Serpent
1x Exiled Force
1x Magician of Faith
1x Breaker the Magical Warrior
1x D. D. Warrior Lady
1x Berserk Gorilla
1x Tribe-Infecting Virus
2x Blade Knight
2x Slate Warrior
2x Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer

Spells(16)

1x Graceful Charity
1x Heavy Storm
1x Pot of Greed
1x Deliquent Duo
1x Premature Burial
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Bait Doll
1x Snatch Steal
2x Smashing Ground
2x Scapegoat
2x Nobleman of Crossout
2x My Body as a Shield

Traps(10)

1x Call of the Haunted
1x Sakuretsu Armor
1x Torrential Tribute
1x Ring of Destruction
1x The Spell Absorbing Life
1x Mirror Force
2x Magic Drain
2x Bottomless Trap Hole

Side Deck(15)
2x King Tiger Wanghu
2x Des Wombat
2x Mataza the Zapper
3x Swarm of Locusts
3x Kinetic Soldier
1x Divine Wrath
2x Pikeru's Circle of Enchantment

OK i like the deck its beatstickish... Lets give it a 8.0/10

Lets get rid of the spell of absorbing life and add in a ceasefire cuz damage is always your friend. lets sideboard the my body as a sheilds and add in 2 metamorphosis cuz you run the two goats and thats just asking for TER. Lets also try to drop the bait doll and add in a dust tornado cuz i think its a little better when running against goats. just side board the other nobleman of crossout to bring the deck count down to 41 and drop a smashing groung for a votrex.

- x2 blade knights
+ x2 gorrillas

-spell absobing life
+ceasefire

these are a better beatsticks than the knights if you are not running chaos. the bait doll is up in the air, you can re-use it, but i won't destroy any magic cards that are down. with all of the book of moons and controllers out there it will only let you know what is face down.