Well...youve got most of this right...kinda....

Okay your first problem is that your running too many monsters...lets drop it down to 16

-Exiled Force

Honestly hes kinda a waste of a summon, so thats one down.

Now your darks priority seems a lil off...lets drop a Kycoo and add in a sangan.

-Kycoo
+Sangan

But wait, were still at 17!!!

So lets look at your lights, hmmm....for me, i dont get to use Blade Knights effect often enough to have him around so for you i say...

- 2 Blade Knight
+Reflect Bounder

there we go! 16 monsters

Now for your magic and traps...

Okay your problem here is that you have too many traps and now enough magic.

The order i always use is 16 monsters 18 magic and 6 traps.

Okay for your traps, youve gotta pick Either 2 Dust Tornados or 2 Sak. Armors...its not both. But you could always mix em up, thats always fun. So lose two of your trap cards.

Now that means you have four cards you need to add to your deck, lets put them in your magic cards.

Well, your deck screams meta, and i hope you have some fusions

so lets + 2 Metamorphosis

and that leaves open two spots my friend...
Now for people who have empty spots in their magic cards should always add in a brain control.

+Brain Control

Now we just need one more...hmmmm

I would either, add in an enemy controller, or put in a smashing ground. I'll leave that up to you.

WERE DONE!!! Without the changes i say 8.9/10 chaos deck, but with the changes i say its a 9.4/10, it looks a lot like my deck actually but hey...all cookies look pretty much the same. Return the favor, check my deck on my sig.

Nice deck:

-1 Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer
-1 Exiled Force
-2 Blade Knight
+1 Sangan
+1 Asura Priest
+1 Brain Control
+1 Smashing Ground

I like 8 Traps in here there is nothing wrong w/ it..........

Nice Deck 8.5/10

Check my deck out in my sig

*reads list*

*reads again to make sure he's right*




You forgot Delinquent Duo?!? XD

Fix:

-2 Kycoo
-1 Bounder
-1 Smashing/Swords/Brain

+1 Tsukuyomi
+1 Sangan
+1 Magical Merchant
+1 Delinquent Duo

If I thought you had a Morphing or Decree, I'd tell you to add them in, too.