Hey I was wondering if you guys could rate my deck.

Monk Fighter x2
Marauding Captain x2
Big Shield Guardna
Exiled Force
Breaker the Magical Warrior
Mid Shield Guardna x2
Master Monk
Zaborg the Thunder Monarch x2
Gemini Elf
Charcoal Inpachi x3
Obnoxious Celtic Guardian
Mine Golem x3
Dark Magician x3
D. D. Warrior Lady
Dark Magician Girl
Slate Warrior
D. D. Survivor

27 Monsters

Jar of Greed x3
Minefield Eruption
Spellbinding Circle
Magic Cylinder
Negate Attack
Barrel Behind the Door
Ring of Destruction

9 Traps

Black Pendant x3
Axe of Despair x2
Harpie's Feather Duster
Lighting Vortex
United We Stand
Change of Heart
Monster Reincarnation
Reinforcement of the Army
Swords of Revealing Light
Pot of Greed

13 Spells

49 Cards in total

Please rate this I need help on improving my deck

oky doky dude,

First off it's best to keep your deck 40-42 cards.
I try not to keep my traps no greater than 8
I find 16-18 Spells are good
Go no more than 18 monsters.

Alright! Let's get to the deck, it looks kinda like either a rock deck..or a warrior deck. Let's go with rocks. It's in advanced format. And I've never tried a bulilding a rock deck, but I wanna help.

Tribute
1x Granmarg the Rock Monarch
1x Guardian Sphinx
2x Megarock Dragon

Non- Tribute
3x Mine Golem
3x Stone Statue of the Aztecs
3x Medusa Worm
2x Golem Sentry
1x Grave Ohja
1x Magician of Faith
1x Sangan

Spell
3x Book of Moon
2x Nobleman of Crossout
2x Smashing Ground
1x Pot of Greed
1x Graceful Charity
1x Snatch Steal
1x Heavy Storm
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Lightning Vortex
............I'm Sorry dude! I gotta go now! >_< You can choose the rest of your spells from here, and for traps, you can add in some Fairy Box, or Crosscounter since rocks have good def.

Thanks dude but I have won a couple of local toruneys with that deck. I was needing like some tips on how to improved it not make a new one. Thanks

Diemert