k heres the big fix
Monster: 18
3 penguin soldiers
3 nigtmare penguin
3 Giga Gagagigo
2 Abyss Soldier
2 Magician of Faith
1 Tribe-Infecting Virus
1 D. D. Warrior Lady
1 Sinister Serpent
1 Morphing Jar
1 Breaker the Magical Warrior
Spell: 15
3 a legendary ocean
2 Book of Moon
1 Nobleman of Crossout
1 Card Destruction
1 Pot of Greed
1 Graceful Charity
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Heavy Storm
1 Lightning Vortex
1 Premature Burial
2 salvage
Trap: 7
3 compulsuary evacuation
1 Mirror Force
1 Torrential Tribute
1 Ring of Destruction
1 Call of the Haunted
this should work a lot better cuz the point of water is bounce the swarm for lotts of damege

no i git the deck i was just since it was water it would help if u did that i didnt try to b mean or nothin i was just tryin to help

k i dont understand y serial spell is there i think maybe a legendary ocean would help in that play so u can play giga gagio easier and power up ur water ppl and if they play gravity bind against u u can go rite under them

o sry i c now sry i was just trying to help mut i still think alo is help ful and so is penguin solder but its ur deck so ill shut up and leave this thread

- lightning vortex
+ deliinquent duo, skill drain or ceasefire

- tiv
+cyber jar

nice deck 9/10

well, first I would suggest taking out Lightning Vortex. Sinister is good, yes, but there are better things you can use him for (i.e., Big Wave Small Wave). Also, you won't see many fields with lots of creatures in them, as you have torrential and mirror force here. Lightning vortex is best side-decked against massive swarm (gravekeepers, etc.), and you already have two cards to get rid of single monsters that work way better.

Also, I would take out Gogiga Gogagigo. It's big, but there are better creatures you can use...Levia Dragon comes to mind, as it is fairly big, or Suijin with its effect.

I have to say that I don't care much for the serial spell here. Milling the deck is great in a deck destruction deck, but that isn't your point...it will also kill your hand, forcing you to topdeck (since serial spell requires that you discard your entire hand), and some of these cards you have are really bad topdecks.

D.D. Warrior Lady and Breaker the Magical Warrior really don't belong here...consider Mobius for spell/trap removal?

I know you dislike ALO, but it could be useful in this deck. There is no need to make it dependent on ALO--after all, you can still summon Gagagigo without a tribute, and since you aren't running the typical G-Binds and Level limits, it doesnt really even matter if ALO gets destroyed. however, putting it in there makes it so that all of your water monsters are higher than 2000 ATK (except sinister hah :D ) and all but 2 of them can be summoned without tribute! In a pinch, that can really help you out if you don't have a BWSW in your hand.

If you insist that ALO should stay out, I'd add another Big Wave Small Wave--you only have two, and that seems to be the main way you want to get your big monsters out barring dropping their levels or wasting a premature/call on them.

Therefore, I'll put in two fixes--one that I would do with this deck and one that doesnt put in ALO:

1st fix: 41 cards

-Lightning Vortex
-2 serial spell
+Big Wave Small Wave


2nd fix: 40 cards
-Lightning Vortex
-Breaker the Magical Warrior
-2 Gogiga Gogagigo
-D.D. Warrior Lady
-2 Serial Spell
-1 Dark Factory of Mass Production
+3 ALO
+Mobius the Frost Monarch
+Levia-Dragon Daedalus




Just as a personal aside: I know that you have a specific idea for your deck, and often other people's suggestions don't fit in to that idea, but you don't have to reject their suggestions so forcefully. We are all just trying to help.