okay guys I need the truth about this one. I kinda just threw it together for a sealed box tourny.

Low level monsters
Silent swordsman lv3
magician of faith
exiled force
brain jacker
shining angel
d.d assailant x2
morphing jar
cyber jar
sangan
horus lv 4

1 tribute monster
jinzo
silent swordman lv 5
horus lv 6

Special summon
Horus lv 8
lv7 silent

traps
bottomless x2
torrential tribute
judgment of anubis
rageki break
magic jammer 2x
negate attack
sakuretsu armor 2x
a hero emerges 2x
call of the hunted
magic cylinder

magic
lightning vortex
sords of rev light
heavy storm
snatch steal
monster reincarnation 2x
mysical space typhoon
united we stand
creatur swap
premature burial.

Hmm theres a few things to be said:

That amount of traps (14) with Jinzo in your deck is a no no! :eek: Just imagine the amount of cards you would draw that you couldn't use. As a general rule, don't run more than five or six traps if you run a Jinzo in your deck, and I wouldn't go any higher than seven or eight even if you don't run a Jinzo just in case your opponent drops one on you. Plus that amount of traps are gonna leave a huge target for your opponents m/t removal (Heavy Strom, Mystical Space Typhoon, Dust Tornado's).

Even the Monster/Magic/Trap ratio up to about 17/18/5 or something like that.

Next, I would either choose to go the Horus route or the Silent Swordsman route. Better to concentrate on one and get the most out of it than run but ineffectively. If you go with Silent's you could have all the Warrior support that goes with them, wheras you would have all the Dragon support for Horus. One deck can't really handle both.

Check out the Search function for Horus or Silent and you should get a few good examples of the way to go. If you decide to focus on one, post here and I'll come back and help out with what I can.

Good luck! :classic: