Deckmaster: If there is one it would be Peten the Dark Clown
Deck Type: Burn/Control
Creator: Exarion !@

Could you please rate and fix?

Monsters:

1x Magician of Faith
3x Giant Germ
3x Des Koala
2x White Magician Pikeru
2x Ebon Magician Curran
3x Peten the Dark Clown
1x Cyber Jar

Magic:

3x Chain Energy
3x Toll
3x Dark Room of Nightmare
2x Spell Absorption
2x Mask of the Accursed
2x Level Limit Area B

Traps:

3x Dimension Wall
2x Gravity Bind
2x Nightmare Wheel
2x Curse of Darkness
1x Tower of Bable

I hope this deck is enough... Heh Heh... :devious:

All I have to say is that looks like a lock that really hurts you might want to try some jammers or drains to deal with thise who run Giant trunades in addition to the MST and HS

I have alot of fixes for this deck. You want to go with a cohesive burnlock down strategy with a chain energy deck. You want to put your opponent in a darned if you do darned if you don't situation with your Chain Energies. But honestly I like the Curse of Darkness alot better. Let's go in that direction.

-2x White Magician Pikeru
-2x Ebon Magician Curran
-3x Peten the Dark Clown
-1x Chain Energy
-3x Toll
-3x Dark Room of Nightmare
-2x Mask of the Accursed
-3x Dimension Wall
-2x Nightmare Wheel

We need to develop a strategy that is self-supporting. You were going in the right direction but several of your cards simply detract from the goal. You want to add in...

+1 Morphing Jar
+1 Mask of Darkness
+2 Lava Golem
+2 Stealth Bird
+1 Sangan
+3 Wave Motion Cannon
+2 Messeger of Peace
+2 Giant Trunade
+2 Ojama Trio
+1 Tower of Babel
+1 Ceasefire
+2 Magic Jammer/Drain
+1 Curse of Darkness

Let me explain these changes. Morphing jar is a burn staple. Mask of Darkness to recycle your many traps. Lava Golem combos with ojama trio and is a good two for one. Stealth bird offers a continous form of burn. Sangan because every monster you use excluding the Lava golems, are searchable by it. Wave motion cannon is just good burn. Messenger of peace for a greater amount of stall. Giant Trunade because if you find yourself needing to play alot of cards, just Giant trunade all of your curse of darknesses/chain energies away. It is also good against someone who plays royal decree. :noid:

i like this deck. is burn lockdown deck.. seems prety interesting. i prefer to face this kind of deck rather than (lava golem, stealth bird or solar).
ok!


+thestalos
+card destruction
+curse of the forbiden spell
i´d find room for 1 dust tornado OR FOR A MAGIC REFLECTOR
i like your ide of "babel Tower"

8/10 for me.

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