this is my first actual deck so please rate 1-10(i quit for awhile and startin back up)
Monsters:29
Master Kyonshee
Spirit Reaper
Blue Eyes Whit Dragon
Flash Assailant
Command Knight
Dark Magician
Mystical Elf(2)
Sangan
Electric Snake
Insect Queen
Magician of Faith(2)
Launcher Spider
Catapult Turtle
D.D. Warrior Lady
Invader of the Throne
Minar
Ryu-Ran
Mad Sword
Giant Soldier of Stone
Prevent Rat
Avatar of the Pot
Stone Orge Grotto
Harpie's Brother
Hyozanryu
Perfect Machine King
Injection Fairy Lily
Flying Kamakiri #1

Traps:8
Dark Spirit of the Silent
Two-Pronged Attack
Shadow Spell
Curse of Anubis
Magic Jammer
Deal of Phantom
Trap Hole
Raigeki Break

Magic:9
Shield and Sword
My Body as a Shield
Dragged Down Into the Grave
Mystic Wok
Chain Energy
Mask of Dispel
Swords of Revealing Light
Dark Room of Nightmare
Horn of Light

Ritual:4
Turtle Oath(ritual)
Crab Turtle
Commencement Dance (ritual)
Performence of Sword

Plz rate and give any suggestions or sumthing wrong plz will rate other decks

This is cool. My brother, darkknightpeten, just got back into YGO too.
The 1st thing you need to do is pick a clear theme for your deck. Your deck is currently all over the place. Try dropping the rituals, and less tribute monsters. Magcian of faith is limited to one copy per deck. Look at your monster/speel/trap cards. Try to look at where u lose card advantage.
Definetly do this drop
Ryu Ran
Launcher Spider
Insect Queen
the equip cards
THE RITUALS NEED TO GO!!!! They slow you down and w/ no revival cards the monsters tributed don't have any other use.

Please return the favor. a link for my deck is in my sig

[1] Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys
[3] Berserk Gorilla
[3] Enraged Battle Ox
[3] Indomitable Fighter Lei Lei
[2] Giant Rat
[2] Des Laccoda
[1] Exiled Force
[1] Injection Fairy Lily
[1] Mystic Swordsman LV2
[1] DD Warrior Lady
[1] Magician of Faith
[1] Hand of Nephthys
[20]

[1] Snatch Steal
[2] Creature Swap
[1] Book of Moon
[1] Scapegoat
[1] Swords of Revealing Light
[1] Premature Burial
[1] Dark Hole
[3] Smashing Ground
[1] Nobleman of Crossout
[1] Heavy Storm
[1] MST
[14]

[1] Ceasefire
[1] Torrential Tribute
[3] Spiritual Earth Art - Kurogane
[1] Call of the Haunted
[6]

I suggest buying some structure decks.