tribute monstersx4
jinzo
dark ruler ha des
zaborg the thunder monarch
mobius the frost monarch

monsters x14
berserk gorillax3
sangan
winged kuriboh
blade knight
exiled force
slate warrior
injection fairy lily
penguin soldier
breaker the migical worrior
morphing jar
dd warrior lady
amazoness swords woman
twin headed behemoth
dd assailant

magicx11
dark hole
heavy storm
sowrds of revealing light
brain control
lightnig vortex
pemature burial
creature swap
enemy controller
snach steel
mystical space typhoon
scapegoat

trapx9
magic cylider
nightmare wheel
torential tribute
call of the hauted
wabokux3
royal decree
ultimate offering

what would you rate this deck and is it ready for a Tournament i dont no what else to add

you only have 3 fiends and that's including ha des!!!!
Get rid of him!
put in some cool equips like mage power and united we stand!
I find it strange to call this deck a beatdown seeing as alot of the monsters aren't that strong!
lily and berserk gorilas aside, I think it's really weak!!!!!
I see no gemini elf in there either!
WHAT'S GOING ON!?
Drop magic cylinder only if you do power up your deck because with a beatdown,
your opponent should be defending like mad trying to save themselves from total destruction!!
and that means they won't be attacking you with high power monsters therefore eliminating the need for magic cylinder!!!!
if you ask me your deck only gets 5/10!
MAXIMUM!!!!!
YOU NEED TO LOOK AT CLASSIC BEATDOWN BUILDS!!!!
'CAUSE IF YOU DON'T, YOU'RE IN TROUBLE!!!!!
:tired: :disappoin :knockedou
THAT'S PRETTY MUCH HOW I SEE YOUR DUELS GOING!!!!!
SORRY FOR BEING A BIT BRUTAL!
BUT I FIND IT WORKS!!!!!
:classic:

-1 nightmare wheel
-3 waboku
-1 ultimate offering
-1 lightnig vortex
-1 penguin soldier
-1 dark ruler ha des
-1 twin headed behemoth
-1 dark hole
-1 winged kubrioh

+1 mirror force
+2 sakuratsu
+2 dust tornado
+2 spirit reaper
+1 anciant gear beast
+1 mistic swords man lv2
+2 smashing ground

now it's more like it.
in case you are wondering, dark hole is banned, and if you are really running beatdown, your opponent won't have too many face up mosters for you to lightening vortex.
the other ones are pretty obvious.