Need some help with this build. The idea is to use magical merchant to put pieces of exodia in the grave, then to get them back with magic cards. Also, I put in ultimate offering cause this deck is alot of monsters, so I can set a bunch and not worry as much about nox or taking extra damage. I also put in bokoichi cause it combos well with dark factory, dekoichi, and ultimate offering. After talking with a friend, I am not sure that bokoichi is going to be a good choice. He made the point that if I use ultimate offering to special summon bokiochi face up then it is just gonna get crushed. Well that is why I am posting here...what do ya think?

40 cards

Monsters 34

Magical merchant x3
dekoichi x 3
exodia x 5
tsukuyomi
spirit reaper x 3
sangan
mystic t x 3
gravekeepers spy x 2
spear cretin x 3
emissary of the afterlife x 3
treeborn
magician of faith x2
bokoichi the freightening x 2
cobra jar x 2

Magic 3

graceful charity
dark factory of mass production x 1
monster reincarnation

Traps 3
Ultimate offering x 1
Backup soldier x 2


Edited to -1 UO and dark factory +2 Backup soldier

you may want Backup Soldier in there in place of an UO... or replace both with Backup Soldier

Why do you think I should take out Ultimate Offering? I agree that I should have some backup soldiers in but not sure where? Ok I put 2 in.

I don't, I was suggesting to possibility of it.