Monsters-20
2x Chaos Sorcerer
1x Mobius the Frost Monarch
1x Exiled Force

The Lights-8
2x Reflect Bounder
2x Blade Knight
1x D.D. Warrior Lady
1x Mirage Dragon
2x Magician of Faith

The Darks-8
1x Dekoichi the Battlechanted Locomotive
1x Sangan
1x Breaker the Magical Warrior
1x Goldd, Wu-Lord of Dark World
1x Spirit Reaper
1x Pitch-Black Warwolf
1x Tsukuyomi
1x Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer

Spells-12
1x Heavy Storm
1x Lightning Vortex
1x Graceful Charity
1x Hammer Shot
1x Fissure
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Premature Burial
2x Nobleman of Crossout
1x Swords of Revealing Light
1x Monster Reincarnation
1x Snatch Steal

Traps-10
1x Mirror Force
2x Bottomless Trap Hole
3x Sakuretsu Armor
1x Dark Deal
1x Torrential Tribute
1x Dust Tornado
1x Call of the Haunted

-1 call (too slow...)
*to make it 41 cards

-1 dark deal (you just play one dark world...)
-1 bottomless (1 is enough)
-1 sak (2 is enough)
+2 spirit reaper
+1 cyber siten (if you have fusions...)

-1 swords
+1 scape goat (swords is not worth it anymore)

-1 lighting vortex
+book of moon (lighting vortex is a -1 don't play it...)

-1 fissure
-1 hammer shot
+2 smashing ground (obv.)

-1 dark deal (you just play one dark world...)
+1 confiscation

I understand you may not have all of those cards, but try to get those and your deck should work more smooth and better.

reflect bounder is limited to 1.
lose 1 bounder, 1 saku armor, and dust tornado for 3 trunades
r/f my deck in my sig

i don't understand how call is too slow.
i know i only run 1 dark world but i like it cause it's a good tech against heavy, graceful, and nobleman.
the bottomless and saku saved me on many occasions.
i'm actually trying to get a second reaper.
i don't have any worthwhile fusions to waste 5000 lp on so cyber stein is a no.
swords is a better card IMO. the goats aren't guaranteed to last at most 2 turns.
who said vortex is a -1. if the opponent has f/u monsters on the feild it's still a +1 in your favor.
the smashings i'm trying to get but once i do i'll make the change.
i already made a comment for the dark deal.

if i remember correctly you can have 2 bounders unless they changed the ban list within the past two weeks and i didn't know about it.

as for the trunade, i just don't like it cause it doesn't destroy their magic and trap cards. i rather them go away for good then be set or activated again the next turn.

I mean if you think dark deal is good tech that's your choice, I mean youlose 1000 lps and a card from your hand (most likely never will be goldd) I woudl rather let my opponent just play their spell for that cost lol.

Most the time in this format everybody plays decree, decree>all your traps that will be worthless.

Yeah try to get reapers lol, they are common from the zombie structure...

Yeah I understand the cyber stien part (if youd on't have cyber twin, etc.)

If you have good field control and presence your opponent should never have alot of monsters, so most the time (well for me, if i played it) vortex would be a -1.

i understand what you mean on some of the things but i only play at local tourneys and never plan on going to a regional or even nationals. i just want to win those local tourneys. and earlier today i actually won my first one with this build and i was wondering if anyone could make it be the type of deck you'd know if you won, if was just barely and not an overwhelming victory.