Everren's Dark World

Any help would be great. I'm trying to use Dark world's monster ability to come back from the grave as draw power and as field pressure. If you can think of any other cards that would help me in that endeavor, I offer you much thanks and I'll Fix and rates back.

Tribute monters: 8

Great Maju Garzett
Goldd Wu Lord of Dark World x 3
Sillva warlord of Dark World x 2
Cyber Dragon x 2

Non-Tribute Monsters: 12

Brron Mad king of Dark world x 3
Beiige Vanguard of Dark world x 2
Breaker
Sangan
Exiled Force x2
Morphing Jar
Sand Moth x 2

Magic: 14

Graceful
Card destruction
Card of safe return x 2
Premature burial
Dark world Lightning x 3
Smashing Ground x 2
Heavy Storm
Enemy controller
Gateway to dark world x 2

Traps: 6

Dark Deal x 2
Sakuretsu Armor x 2
Mirror Force
Call of the Haunted

Okay, that sounds good but with all of your drawing, where are the cards to return cards from your graveyard to your deck? Add a reload and a pot of avarice just yo keep your deck strong so you do not deck out. Also just so you do not deck out add a bait doll, it helps you and returnd to you deck after you activate it.

The first problem I see is that you have too many tribute monsters, which could lead to bad hands.

- 1 Goldd Wu Lord of Dark World
- 1 Sillva Warlord of Dark World

+ 2 Mystic Tomato

optional
- 2 Exiled Force
+ 2 Newdoria

- 1 Card of Safe Return
+ 1 Nobleman of Crossout

Also, cards like The Cheerful Coffin, Choosen One, and Dragged Down into the Grave can also help this deck.

Other than this the deck looks fine. 8/10 from me.

Could you return the favor and r/f the deck in my sig, thanks.