Monsters: 15

breaker the magical
goldd x3
injection fairy lily
lava golem
manju of the ten thousand x3
sacred phoenix
sangan
senju of the thousand x2
sonic bird x2

ritual monsters: 8

demise, king of armageddon x3
relinquished x3
shinato king of higher plane
the masked beast

ritual spell: 8

black illusion ritual x3
contract with the abyss x2
end of the world x2
shinato's ark

magic spell: 10

axe of despair
fulfillment of contract x2
emergency provisions x2
graceful charity
heavy storm
premature
soul release x2

traps: 5

blast with chain
call of the haunted
magic cylinder
magic jammer
torrential tribute

TOTAL: 47

sounds like a lot but i draw constantly from deck
rate and fix please

Drop:
goldd x3
injection fairy lily
lava golem
manju of the ten thousand x3
sacred phoenix
sonic bird x2
demise, king of armageddon x3
relinquished x3
shinato king of higher plane
the masked beast
black illusion ritual x3
contract with the abyss x2
end of the world x2
shinato's ark
axe of despair
emergency provisions x2
soul release x2
blast with chain
magic jammer

ADD
1.) ONLY 1 Ritual Monster so that would a max 3 of Monster Q NOT 1 of MOnster Q and 1 of Mosnter C.
2.) Add cards which support Ritual monsters. Goldd, Phoenix, Injection, and lava Golem for example Do not hel p the deck what so ever. They 9/10 will give you dead draws UNLESS the deck is built to work around that and this deck wont support any of them at the moment.
3.) Add the only staple in the game Graceful Charity.
4.) So please reply back with which Ritual Mosnter you want to use and we'll see what we can do.

You tell him to take out 36 cards from the deck????? That's almost as bad as Jason from metgame.com.

The lava golem actually serves a purpose, I mean it'll guaruntee any ritual requirements that he'll need with just one card, rather than having to use two or more monsters.

As for the goldd, perhaps he thought the effect would activate if he used it with the ritual as it is not discarded as a cost (it's not even discarded at all . . .), but it won't work that way anyways because it's considered a tribute.

There are questionable cards that he's using, but some of them aren't THAT bad.

I do agree with Saito that the deck could use more focus, I mean "ritual" is too general. Yes you can make a ritual deck, but try to refine it to something more . . . particular.

Yes, I know. I take pride in my work.

BUT, if he ran Relinquished WITH Lava Golem he can eaisly turn his opponents monsters in to Lava Golem food, then turn Lava Golem in to Relinqiushed Food. But nearly all of those cards do not support one another. It's not like building a deck from the cookie cutter pool where nearly all of the cards can work alone, the cards he selected need support, that of which is non-existance.

the lava golem serves for relinquished or the lvl 8 tribs or the shinato comb. special summon lava in def. let shinato kill for 3000 to life goldd serve for people who discard cardd from hand and graceful charity and jammer also 5 star tribs help thus masked beast comes in handy wit fulfillment like use contract wit demise to throw masked then wipe field then fulfill and theres 5600 dmg while payin 2800 plus my friend uses lily for mystic wok when pumped to gain 1400 there is structure in it but each has a diff. combo needed

id want to run around wit demise n relinquished since they are dark i do have ritual foregone and another fullfillment i tried to support other monsters to help me eliminate drawn just magics and ritual cards but foregone is usless because of no attack and dies at end so payin 3000 to wipe the field is useless

Do you realize the following:

Lava Golem + Shinato is a 2 turn combo, the set up may take you too long with your current build.

Using Goldd just because you're running graceful charity is childish and mathematically impossible or using on a regular basis. You'd be better adding in Neko Mane King to catch your opponent off guard by ending his turn from him summoning his Zaborg the Thunder Monarch.

well what would you suggest for a dark ritual deck usin only dark rituals because removin manju is crazy he's the one that can make or break a ritual deck because running only 1 ritual monster will not even hold up in a tourney at all i do have most of the ritual monsters needed just what monsters should i look on gettin a hold of?

A.) If you cut down the number of Ritual Mosnters you'll see why you'll only want to run Manju and not Senju.

B.) Running as many ritual monsters that you're running, will cause you to get HORRIFIC top decks. It would be differnt if you had a more soild support system in your deck, but you dont.

C.) Use the search function to see what decks have been posted for the Ritual monster you choose using. You should find quite a few, then take that build and upgrade it to fit your local Metagame. Then Repost the deck on this thread.

iight ill search around and try to build it any suggestions on what would support it better?

Oooo, Ritual deck! Let's have a looksie here...

NON-RITUAL MONSTERS: 15
breaker the magical
goldd x3
injection fairy lily
lava golem
manju of the ten thousand x3
sacred phoenix
sangan
senju of the thousand x2
sonic bird x2

Well, as was previously mentioned, Goldd won't activate if he's used as Ritual fodder. He has to be discarded by an effect, and for a ritual he's Tributed (not discarded) for a cost (not an effect). Also, since Contract with the Abyss and End of the World require exact matches, you might want to focus a little more on 4- and 8-star monsters, although with Lily and Sangan at 3-star, 2 Goldds ought to work alright. Also, I wouldn't bother with Sonic Bird and Senju since I'm about to suggest a drop in Ritual Monsters/Spells..your Manju trio'll be plenty for you.

Also, you want your high-level monsters to be easily summonable without too many setbacks. The Sacred Phoenix fills this niche nicely, but Lava Golem's a bit iffy. If you don't have Relinquished available, you're giving your opponent a powerhouse that you don't have much in the means of stopping aside from hitting it with Demise or Soul Exchange. If you DO have Relinquished, you take on the burn effect (note that it says "this CARD's controller", not "this MONSTER's controller", so even if it's equipped to Relinquished, you're in control of it and thusly, you're getting scorched.)

RITUAL MONSTERS: 8
demise, king of armageddon x3
relinquished x3
shinato king of higher plane
the masked beast

Masked Beast's a rather worthless Ritual Monster. No effect and beat in stats by Shinato. To be honest, I'd stick with Demise and Relinquished. Their effects are a lot more useful.

NON-RITUAL SPELLS: 10
axe of despair
fulfillment of contract x2
emergency provisions x2
graceful charity
heavy storm
premature
soul release x2

Axe of Despair isn't gonna do anything for you. I'd swap that for a Last Will to make pulling a Manju easier. Also, I've never had any love for Fulfillment of the Contract, so I'd replace those with Pot of Avarice (since you'll be dumping monsters into the grave left n' right) and Mystical Space Typhoon.

RITUAL SPELLS: 8
ritual spell: 8

black illusion ritual x3
contract with the abyss x2
end of the world x2
shinato's ark

Since I suggested dropping Shinato, Shinato's Ark can go as well. Also, I'd drop one Contract with the Abyss and one End of the World. I realize this leaves you with fewer Ritual Spells than Ritual Monsters, but there's method to the madness here: A common tactic with a Ritual Monster deck is to use a Ritual Monster as fodder for another (i.e. saccing 1 Demise to summon another Demise).

TRAPS: 5
blast with chain
call of the haunted
magic cylinder
magic jammer
torrential tribute

Blast with Chain and Magic Jammer aren't really gonna do much for you. If Ring of Destruction and Mirror Force aren't available to you (which wouldn't surprise me given how hard they are to get), you might want to try a couple Royal Decrees.

This is just how I'd work with it, though...I'm a bit of a ritual monster fanatic, so I like to think I know what I'm talking about, but if you don't agree with me on anything, that's cool.

i do like the suggestions but i took out a provisions for sebek's blessings which actually worked well with demise it pays the wipe and gains 400

I know it's been popoular, but I think Snipe Hunter would work

I mean you are running some hand fillers in Manju Senju and Sonic Bird... you could easily dump off cards...