ok..following the advice of guys on here..i totally destroyd my old Deck and rebuilt this new 1...it took a little while ( i ran through my 2 Billy Talent CD's twice) and this is my official Deck for now..till i get more money 2 buy some more cards..let me knw wht u think

TOTAL: 45

Special Summon Only (1)

Raviel, Lord of Phantasms

Tribute Monsters (4)

Dark Ruler Ha Des
Chaos Command Magician
Blue-Eyes White Dragon
Invader of Darkness

Low-Level Monsters (21)

Injection Fairy Lily
Indomitable Fighter Lei Lei x2
Opticlops
Winged Minion
La Jinn the Mystical Genie of the Lamp x2
Giant Orc x2
Night Assailant
Gemini Elf x2
Vorse Raider
Zure, Knight of Dark World x2
Spirit Reaper
D.D. Trainer
Magician's Valkyria
Magician of Faith
Ancient Lamp
Dark Jeroid

Magic Cards (9)

Malevolent Nuzzler
Mystical Space Typhoon
Premature Burial
Lightning Vortex
Enemy Controller
Heavy Storm
Sword of Revealing Light
Mage Power
Megamorph

Trap Cards (10)

Spell Shield Type 8
Spellbinding Circle
Blast with Chain x2
Magic Cylinder
Draining Shield
Torrential Tribute
Karma Cut
Call of the Haunted
Option Hunter
Negate Attack

I'd drop Invader of Darkness. It may have 2900 ATK, but it's 2 Tributes and has an effect that'll almost never be used. I'd probably find something to switch for Chaos Command Magician too, his effect is also kinda limited.

As for lvl 4 and under monsters, I'd say switch the 2 Giant Orc for 2 Goblin Elite Attack Forces (same attack, same effect, 1500 DEF), or just drop them completely. You could also do the same for the Indomitable Fighters. I also suggest losing the D.D. Trainer. and Magician's Valkyria.

Spells seem alright, although maybe Malevolent Nuzzler could be switched for another card, you have plenty of ATK raising in the deck. Maybe a Mystic Plasma Zone would be best, since it'll affect most of your monsters.

Traps could probably use a little work. If you're going to use Spellbinding Circle, you might as well use Shadow Spell if you can. Same effect, but it also lowers the monster's attack by 700. Switch Option Hunter for something better too, like Mirror Force or Sakuretsu Armor if you don't have Mirror Force.

Well, those are the biggest changes I think should be made. I tried to stick with the Dark/Fiend theme, although there's many ways you can go with what you posted here. Seems like it's part Beatdown, part minor Field Control...