It's basically the Zombie Starter Deck on steroids, I didn't change too much, and I know I'm gonna get alot of crap from people saying things like "why would you post this, it's just like the starter" and "what, you couldn't think of your own theme?". IDC. I just want a deck in my siggy.

~Monsters (17)

x1 Vampire Genesis
x2 Despair from the Dark
x3 Vampire Lord
x1 Dark Dust Spirit
x2 Ryu Kokki
x1 Shadow Ghoul
x3 Pyramid Turtle
x1 Soul Absorbing Bone Tower
x1 Spirit Reaper
x1 Fear from the Dark
x1 Double Coston

~Spell (18)

x1 Mystic Plasma Zone
x1 The Shallow Grave
x3 Book of Life
x1 Riryoku
x1 Premature Burial
x3 Call of the Mummy
x1 Lightning Vortex
x1 The Cheerful Coffin
x1 Return of the Doomed
x1 Monster Reincarnation
x1 Card of Safe Return
x1 Different Dimension Capsule
x1 Tribute to the Doomed
x1 Pot of Avarice

~Trap (6)

x1 Rope of Life
x1 Seven Tools of the Bandit
x1 Hallowed Life Barrier
x1 Call of the Haunted
x1 Dark Spirit of the Silent
x1 Judgement of Anubis

Side Deck

Didn't think I really needed one, but if you think I do feel free to make one for me.

Rate ir or fix it or whatever.

I'm not going to rag on your case, but at least decide whether you're playing Traditional Format or Advanced Format. Then you can fix your deck your own way.

Well, I think I put in all the cards shown on the thing that came with the structure deck to make it "better". I mostly tried to add the best cards I had that helped send cards from your deck or hand to the graveyard and ones that special summoned from the graveyard. I was thinking of adding the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd Sarcophagus and Spirit of the Pharoah, but they're not that useful.

I guess if I was to ask for advice on this deck, I would need to know if there are any cards I can replace with better descarding and special summong effects.

1) Listen to Monkeyman666

2) Vampire Genesis sucks.

OK,

1. I'm pretty sure it's already traditional....

2. What sucks about it?

i personally thought the zombie structure was one of the better ones....
id still drop pot of greed for pot of averice and compleatly drop mask of restrict.

you dont have enough banned cards in that deck to bother with all the old staples so drop the baned ones and make it all post ban. like monster reborn for monster reicarnation.

but its also been over a year since i last played

Thanks alot, that really helped. I'll go through the restricted and limited list again alter and replace some of the staples. You sure about Mask of Restrict though? It's not like I'll be offing many tributes, and it can be quite helpful at times.

your deck has 41, i like to keep a strict 40 cards and mask seems the most useless in a pinch

You barely got monsters in the deck... Add in at least 5 monster cards and even out both magic and trap to 20. So you can have an even deck cause if not you will never get the hands you want. Also loose the shadow ghoul and ya got too many tribute monsters.

As many people have already stated, you should take out the few banned cards from your deck. Those being Painful Choice, Monster Reborn, and Pot of Greed. Also, you have some combos and such that aren't actually very good. For instance, Great Dezard and Fusioh Richie probably won't help you that often, I would switch them out for more reliability. Vampire Genesis isn't that good also, but if you want to use him , I would use 3 Vampire Lord. Another thing as has also been said, was that you don't have enough monsters, and I'm inclined to agree with that, 15 just doesn't seem enough. Some of your Spells and Traps are also fairly below average, but I'll address those later.

So then, my fixes would be:

Take out:
monsters
x1 Great Dezard
x1 Fushioh Riche
x1 Shadow Ghoul
and possibly Vampire Genesis or one Despair From the Dark

spells
x1 Serial Spell
x1 Painful Choice
x1 Mystic Plasma Zone
x1 The Cheerful Coffin
x1 Return of the Doomed
x1 Monster Reborn
x1 Pot of Greed

traps
x1 Hallowed Life Barrier
x1 Dark Spirit of the Silent
x1 Judgement of Anubis
x1 Mask of Restrict

And the add in:

monsters
Pyramid Turtle x1(giving you 3)
Giant Rat x3(or x2, your choice)
Ryu Kokki x2(or x3, again your call)
Vampire Lord x1

spells
Book of Life x1
Pot of Avarice x1

traps
Waboku x1
Compulsory Evacuation Device x2
Magic Drain x1

All the cards I suggested you put in are fairly easy to get so if you choose to take my advice, you should have little difficulty doing so.

I hope I was helpful, if I was would you R/F my deck? It is in my signature if you decide to.

Akira Mushin- I the main point of this deck is to send monsters to your graveyard and special summon them, so I will be needing alot of tribute monsters.

Yami Chasi- I will take most of your advice into effect, but I like the traps I put in, they seem to work well, other than Mask of Restrict. I think I'll keep Shadow Ghoul and Genesis, though.

Ok, I'm pretty sure I fixed everything you guys told me to.