Monsters:22
Tributes:8
[1] Jinzo
[2] Thestalos The Firestorm Monarch
[1] Ganmarg The Rock Monarch
[1] Mobius The Frost Monarch
[3] Cyber Dragon

Low-Level Monsters:14
[3] Hydrogeddon
[2] Elemental Hero Wildheart
[2] Don Zaloog
[2] Dekoichi The Battlechanted Locomotive
[2] Sand Moth
[1] Sangan
[1] Spirit Reaper
[1] Treeborn Frog

Magics:13
[1] Pot Of Avarice
[1] Brain Control
[1] Heavy Storm
[1] Soul Exchange
[1] Nobleman Of Crossout
[1] Reinforcaments Of The Army
[1] Swords Of Revealing LIght
[2] Smashing Ground
[1] Premature Burial
[1] Snatch Steal
[1] Mystical Space Typhoon
[1] Scapegoat

Traps:7
[1] Ring Of Destruction
[1] Mirror Force
[1] Torrential Tribute
[1] Bottomless Trap Hole
[2] Sakuretsu Armor
[1] Call Of The Haunted

somebody can give a rate or a fix i know you are there

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-reinforcements (you only have 4 warriors and it's a monarch deck, so the warriors probably aren't to important to have right away)
- swords of revealing light (this is a more aggressive deck, and you have plenty of monsters for field presence
-2 sandmoth (good effect, but youve only got 1 granmarg and you might as well use the effect to destroy your opponents s/t or set monster...this is better in a dark world deck with dark world lightning)

+sakuretsu (might as well destroy instead of stall with sorl)
+smashing ground (same as sakuretsu)

this puts you at 40 cards and clears the field a little better than what you had. you could keep the reinforcements...41 isn't a big deal since it's thinning your deck anyway. but i'd replace the swords and sandmoths with a sakuretsu and smashing ground.