I would like help on this deck. If any ones has made a deck like this I would like some pointers.

Monster:20

Giant Rate x3
Pyramid Turtle x3
Vampire Lord
Ryu Kokki
Goldd, Wu-lord of Dark world
Sillva, Warlord of Dark world
Gren , tactician of Dark world
Kahkki, Guerilla of Dark world
Brron, Mad King of Dark wold
Scarr, Scout of Dark world
Morphing jar
Sangan
Card Tropper x3
Neo-spacian Grand Mole Rat

Magic:14
Card of Safe Return x3
Premature Burial
Gateway to Dark world x2
Book of life x2
Dark world Thunder x3
Lightning Vortex x3

Trap: 6
Call of the Haunted
Bottomless Trap Hole x3
Torrential
Ring of Destruction

My first reaction seeing this: O.O;

Wow um....I think you're doing a little too much with this. I know you're trying to utilize as much reborn ability as possible to fully utilize COSR but combining the two themes with the build you got here....well....it isn't good.

You got Call of the Haunted in your spell lineup...better fix that.

Um ok well first off you're searching too much for earth type. Cut the 3 rat. I know why Trooper is there but unless you're running Machine Dup (which you're not), best not to use Rat. Grand Mole is too random of a tech and with the cut of Rat, he's more of a side board. Put 2 more Ryu Kokki and 2 into Goldd. Scarr is meant for dedicated DW. Brron is a good discard tool but only when dealing battle damage. Cut the both for another Sillva and another Kakki since you got to worry about Monarchs and their 2400 atk stats.

Though COSR is great, running it in 3's can leave you with dead draws. Cut it to 2. Also cut Dark World LIGHTNING to 2 and Lighting Vortex to two to put it 3 Dark World Dealings. This helps you get to draw more.

Traps well instead of Bottomless, try Solemn Judgement. You can stop key plays from your opponent better than Bottomless. Especially if they try to destroy your COSR.