I would stick with matazas instead of hayabusas simply for the fact that he does what hayabusa can do except he does it better and he can't switch sides. I would also try to get some level limits like someone said earlier. United we stand and mage power would also help since your running scapegoat. So my changes would be something like this:

-1 Nobleman of Extermination
-1 DD Designator
-2 Hayabusa
+2 Mataza
+1 UWS
+1 Mage Power

- Barrel Behind the Door
- Compulsory Evacuation Device
+Mataza the Zapper
+Mataza the Zapper

With 3 Mataza the Zappers you will be able to dominate the field with an averrage of 2 attacks per turn.


- Zaborg The Thunder Monarch
- Blowback Dragon
+Total Defense Shogun
+Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv 6/Silent Swordsman lv.5

The reason these are in is because you get the abitily to by pass the level limit area Bs and attack.

- Nobleman of Extermination
- D.D. Designator
- Big Bang Shot
- Axe of Despair
+Level Limit area B
+Level Limit area B
+United We Stand
+Mage Power

The Level Limit area Bs will be added to as one of your lines of defence from your oppenent. United We Stand and Mage Power in my opinion is a much better equip then big bang shot and Axe of despair.

Thanks for r/f my deck.

~ Davis

Nice deck, 9 out of 10. The only things I can think of is you can try out solemn judgement to stop those bad things frmo happening to your plan.

hey i just read your ummmmmm........thread and i coudn't help but notice that you don't have any direct damage monsters in their!!!
what's with that???
if you added cards like inaba white rabbit or mystical lamp for example it would greatly improve this deck!!!
calling this deck a beatdown is an insult to all beatdown players including me!!!
add axe of despair and/or united we stand for massive attack boosts!!!
try to have cards that help you draw so you can get your gravity bind on the field as soon as possible!!! this added draw power will also allow you to get your DIRECT DAMAGE MONSTERS out to the field to do damage to your opponents!!! SERIOUS DAMAGE seeing as you have MASSIVE POWER BOOSTS!!!
:devious: :devious: :devious:

The reason why i don't use solemn judgement is because it's too much of a big cost for it's effect.

I like your suggestions as a matter of fact I took out D.D designator Yesterday, but i'm having a hard time finding United we stand and Mage power, so axe and Big bang shot will have to do for now. I also took out Compulsory Evacuation Device yesterday ,but i replaced it with a BTH, and Barrel Behind the Door Saved my @$$ more times than i can count so i have to think about it. Mataza the Zapper is a good card, but i can't find him either and I'm planning on Buying the Water Structure Deck For the Level Limits. Barrel dragon Plays surprisingly well in this deck (helps clear the field of Monsters spells and traps so my low level monsters can get a direct attack in) and i will still be able to use it's effect even with gravity bind in play
(Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv 6, Silent Swordsman lv.5 and Total Defense Shogun can't attack when Gravity Bind is active on the field) and I was planning on taking out Zaborg the thunder monarch when i got my hands on Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv 6 or Silent Swordsman lv.5.

Okay okay geesh. I know that i need more equips in there TRUST ME THIS ISN"T THE FIRST BEATDOWN I"VE MADE, but i'm having a hard time getting them. As For direct damage monsters i have the raging flame sprites which their attack increases by 1000 points every time they successfully attack my opponent's life points directly; Combine that with gravity Bind and trust me the damage adds up. As for drawing power i manage to draw gravity bind in every duel (more than once) and I feel as though I have enough with pot and graceful charity.

Anyways I love all of your Changes and i will Put all of those cards on my Most wanted list. Anyone else have a suggestion any help will do :)

Anyone help please. I could use a few more suggestions.

well back when I was playing machines with high defence I liked
labirinth of nightmare which will probably help dream clown out while leaving your opponents monsters often in defense position.

you can try it, labirinth of nightmare has some interesting matchups.