Thanks everybody, for your r/fs :) and I have made sure to return all the r/fs I still owed. I will make sure to consider all of your advice and get the cards I need to do so.

~ Davis

Yeah, I noticed this when I built this deck and I see you haven't fixed it: there are 18 monsters, not 17.

I see you've dropped the Dust Tornado for a more defensive trap.
And I see that there are two EBO's but I don't remember what was there before.
You might want to try Exarion over EBO's because the only other thing they help is Berserk and Iggy (is that his hip new name?) has more attack and a lot more defense.

ANYWAY, I'm just looking back on it.

Thanks I forgot to change my monster count, when adding in the EBO and taking out Magical Merchant. My friend Andrew is going to help me get a EU, and he always get though so how, I guess that swhy he's called the master trader.

~ Davis

nice deck but mmaybe instead of morphoing jar you could add in a marauding captain it could help you with swarming also could you r/f my deck its the thread called earthen fortress thanks

your deck is good ive been looking for a jinzo for quite a while

Thanks for your thought. :) , I have updated my deck to fit the updated ban list.

~ Davis

Great Deck, I can't find anything wrong with it! 9/10

This is actually a very good deck and I see a lot of potentional like topping a regionals and competeing in a National. So it looks like a Nation Player's deck. Very sexy.

9.7/10

Rate and fix my deck please! :D

very good I 'like what you've done the deck, 10/10, I've made some major changes my self

hey davis i like the changes. And also no problem for the cards. get your grades up so you can go to SJC. And you didnt tell me you lived near Age of Excalibur. i used to go their every saturday before i got back into yugioh.

Really nice deck, i may not have any suggestions at this time but if i think of something i will let ya know ;)

-1 airknight
+1 cyber dragon/horus lv 6
9.5/10

most ppl will use 2-3 berzerk, and i see dda's in 3's as well. also, i like the way you set your deck up in the catagories. it makes it more organized and easier to see what you need, etc. mind if i use it as well?

mind looking at my horus or ben kei?

Cyber Jar is about the only thing that I can see that would have a nice home in this deck. It can help refill your hand and get you to swarm the field.

I'm not completely sold on the Gravekeeper's Spy, I know it's thinning/swarm, but being able to only grab one other copy of itself seems to hurt it's playability a bit. If it's working well for you, more power to you. I obviously haven't tested this deck out myself, so I really can't say for sure.

My brain is shot right now after a long week of work. I wish I could come up with some other good ideas for you. I'll try and see if I can come up with anything else.