I think I might be misinterpreting your second point, but Dice Jar and Barrel Behind the Door don't work (since Dice Jar doesn't guarantee damage to you)...unless you only meant to use Ring and Barrel...

--Ok, Inuyasha, you are right, barrel and jar dont work well, which is why I tossed it out before. So thank you.
--Now as for play-for-cash, please, you started angry, continued angry and will finish angry, because you were proved wrong more than once. Now just chill, take some breaths, I will not give a long, well thought out response this time because just cant listen or provid backup to your statements. Where's your proof it doesn't work, hello!, it won 2 unofficial tournys and 1 official(local card shop that was supported by upperdeck). So obviously it works, see i have info to back it up.
--I don't cry and complain buddy, I'm at parties every weekend, because I am what you call, popular. I play as side thing for fun, its one of secrets from the ladies. My girlfriend is so hot that when Ben Affleck was at our work(I work at a nightclub) he hit on her. So don't compare your pathetic existence to mine, I hit on chicks for a living and am a published author, already on third book, live in a large house, that I own, unlike you living w/mommy most likely.
--Now that you are in your place, lets see, you run a chaos deck w/ring and barrel. Any good chaos card is banned, as well as ring, so I'm gonna say your a traditional dueler. I have no respect for traditional, just my opinion, but this is an ADVANCED deck, unlike yours. So I can't take you seriously, since your too much of a wimp to accept change and roll with the advanced format.
--Again your opinions lack facts, so No thanks.
Anyone else :classic:

:devious: I'm on again, and I see no response from play~4~cash, guess he accepted he was wrong and such. If you do read this buddy, its ok to know you're wrong, I'm happy you didn't respond, because I wouldn't reply, I saw something on the internet that read something similar to this; Arguing on the internet is like competeing in the special olympics, doesn't matter the outcome, you're still retarded. So please don't waste time replying again, you will be ignored, and any other comments, r/s are appreciated. :)

Ok first off i like the deck idea , but to say that it is "proven" through a couple local tournaments is not a very accurate statement. Personally i love to see somewhat "original" decks like this so as for the only correction/change i would do to this deck is to -1rain of mercy and +1 dark snake syndrom, i love syndrom as a burn card and i think it would do well here. The life point gain isnt going to hurt your opponent nearly as much as the big hits and quick duels that can happen through syndrom. Good luck to you and your friend, happy dueling.

Btw, the joke about the special olympics although funny was in some ways offensive.

the deck has a great ideal to it, but yes it does need protection, other than that ill give a 8/10

Sorry about the special olympic things, just had to throw it in. Thnaks for the suggestions, I will beta the -rain of mercy and add the dark snake syndrome.
Any another :)