ok , no offense but that deck isnt nothing compared to what a truely themed deck is ...

Let me demonstrate by giving you my formula

.-*`~Deck Name~`*-.

"The Neverending Story"

Deck Size - 4o Cards Solid

MonsterS x17

Vampire Genesis x2
Despair from the Dark x2
Vampire lord x3
Ryu Kokki x3
Pyrimid Turtle x3
Breaker
Sangan
Spirit Reaper
Magician of faith

Spells x17

Book of Life x3
Call of the Mummy x2
Creature Swap x2
Mystical Space Typhoon
Swords
Smashing Ground
Premature Burial
Heavy Storm
Lightning Vortex
Tribute to the Doomed
Dark Core
Dark World Lightning
Graceful Charity

Traps x6

Bottomless Trap Hole x3
Majic Darin x2
Call of the Haunted

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Now that is Zombie style , it flows like water and will always land u a monster on the field . Its rarely beaten and will destroy any warrior or spellcaster deck with ease .

You wanted Zombies -- You just got them :devious:

Do you mind if I steal that from ya XD

"The Never ending story"

Updated and established . Give me a R/f and ill return the favor.

Monsters - 18

Breaker.MFC
Dark Dust Spirit.PGD
Dark Dust Spirit.PGD
Hand of Nephthys.FET
Hand of Nephthys.FET
Magician of faith.MRD
Pyrimid Turtle.PGD
Pyrimid Turtle.PGD
Pyrimid Turtle.PGD
Ryu Kokki.IOC
Ryu Kokki.IOC
Ryu Kokki.IOC
Sacred Pheonix of Nephthys.FET
Sangan.MRD
Spirit Reaper.PGD
Treeborn Frog.SOI
Vampire Lord.DCR
Vampire Lord.DCR
Vampire Lord.DCR

SPELLS - 13

Book of Life.PGD
Book of Life.PGD
Book of Life.PGD
Call of the Mummy.PGD
Call of the Mummy.PGD
Creature Swap.LOD
Creature Swap.LOD
Graceful Charity.SDP
Heavy Storm.MRD
Mystical Space Typhoon.MRL
Nobleman of Extermination.PSV
Premature Burial.PSV
Swords.LOB

TRAPS - 8

Call of the Haunted.PSV
Deck Devastation Virus.FET
Deck Devastation Virus.FET
Michizure.PSV
Michizure.PSV
Mirror Force.MRD
Ring of Destruction.IOC
Torrential Tribute.LON

UPDATED from original Build , R/F please and ill return the favor.

Bump a lotta dumps for bumps...

- 2 Astral Barrier
+ 2 Deck Devastation Virus (An extremely fun and evil card, especially with Gadgets running around)

- 2 Spirit Barrier
+ 2 Sakuretsu Armor

- 1 Drop Off
+ 1 Bottomless Traphole

- 1 Serial Spell (Bad Card)
+ 1 Heavy Storm (Good Card)

- 1 Pot Of Avarice
+ 1 Smashing Ground

- 3 Vampire Lady (There are better cards)
+ 1 Vampire Lord
+ 2 Giant Rat (Brings out the Pyramid Turtles faster, hence Vampire Lord/Ryu Kokki faster)

- 1 Despair From The Dark (Not good at all unless you have a Double Coston on the field, which is too situational)
+ 1 Giant Rat

- 1 Double Coston (Too situational with the Despair From The Dark)
+ 1 Spirit Reaper (Great defensive zombie)

- 1 Soul-Absorbing Bone Tower (Decent effect, but I doubt it will stay on the field long enough for it to be worth it)
+ 1 Sangan (I know it may not be a zombie, but it's going to get your Pyramid Turtles a lot quicker)

Well, that's it. I tried to stay with the zombie theme, and just try to understand that the non-zombies will help your speed, which is needed here. I liked the tech with the Rivalry Of Warlords, since I too run that in most of my themed decks.

I hope this helps.