So I'll make a Role / Power / Generic description list, and compare the generic descriptions to make sure no one is too obvious. Then with luck I can just plug those into my writes ups.

I gave my comments after SF ended.

Doesn't hurt to have them here too.

I actually think I'm as close as I'm going to get for my first shot at this. If someone wants to review it for me let me know.

Still looking for someone to review my game.

What's the theme? If I'm not in it, I'll review

The Muppet Show. Primarily based on the original variety show.

I need someone to look at a potential game set up. Theme is undetermined but I'm planning on having the roles dictate what theme I use. I'm leaning towards a generic mish-mash to keep mafia role claims fluid.

I don't have enough time to actively participate in games at the moment, but I wouldn't mind looking at your roles if you don't mind.

I'll probably send them out to you tonight or tomorrow.

Thanks

Would someone mind reviewing roles for a Dresden Files game I'd like to run? I'm working on a basic layout and would like some advice.

Also, if anyone could point out how to set up a proboard, that would be helpful when I run this.

Go to www.proboards.com and follow the instructions.
Feel free to run your ideas by me by the way.

Is there an order of actions that one would recommend using?

Also, how can you tell what is too much detail in a write-up?

Different mods have different styles. I usually let misdirection trump blocking, or I just resolve stuff in the order the actions were submitted. The important thing is to be consistent.
As for detail, no one should be able to tell for sure what is going on.

Check out this old thread, Heirarchy of Night Actions to get a feel for the thoughts of many