I admitted my problems in the past, and I've come a long way since then. Give credit where it's due, get!

I knew I couldn't give zero description with K-ness and it still be a "fair" endgame. It sucked for him that he was the only male left, but even if he had claimed Janette, the 3 remaining characters were way too solid.

Aside from the things already mentioned, what are some things I should improve on?