I've modified the deck... please fix it. now this is version [v.4.7]...

This deck has to controle totally the opponent and make the opponent discard his hand or leave him useless cards with pigeonholing book of spell, my key card! :devious:

Monsters [16]
Jinzo
Airknight Parshath
Mystic Tomato x3
Don Zaloog x2
Newdoria
Dark Jeroid x2
Fiber Jar
Sinister Serpent
Exiled Force
Tribe Infecting Virus
Magician of Faith
Breaker the Magical Warrior

Spells [17]
Pot of Greed
Change of Heart
Snatch Steal
Creature Swap
Enemy Controller x2
Pigeonholing Books of Spell x3
Mirage of Nightmare
Mystical Space Typhoon
Emergency Provisions x2
Heavy Storm
Scapegoat
The Forceful Sentry
Confiscation

Traps [7]
Ring of Destruction
Magic Drain x2
Mirror Wall x2
Call of the Haunted
Sakuretsu Armor


fix it...

this deck looks good to me 8.5/10
i gave u a rating so could u do the same

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http://www.yugiohrealms.com/forum/sh...=403091&page=3

Maybe Spirit Reapers, if you get into trouble you can change them to def. to help you hold on for a bit. Looks good though 8.5/10.

please take a look at the deck in my sig.

Thanks for the high ratings but I prefer to have suggestions than ratings so if someone can tell what can't work and what is ok i'll be happy!

thanks anyway! :D

Try playtesting a couple Mind Haxorz and DD Designators, get rid of some of their best cards for good.

I was thinking about Mind Haxorz but i don't know what can i put away from the deck to make space for that card...

-2 Newdoria
+2 Dark Jeroid

-Sac Armor
-1 Drop Off
+2 Mirror Walls

Helps the deck combo a little better...Jeroid Drops Beat Sticks, and Mirror walls drop beat sticks allowing dons to run rampant.

these are great ideas but i don't want to put away all newdoria... Maybe i can put in 2 Dark Jeroid (that is a very very good card) by throwing away 1 new doria and the exiled force.

I don't know if it's good to put away the three drop off cause it's very good to make my opponent have less cards in his hand but mirror wall is extremely powerfull...

What do you think? keep in mind that this deck is an hand control deck...

I've modified the deck... please fix it. now this is version [v.4.7]...