Can you rate her deck and help her fix it:

Monsters: 20

The creator
Black luster soldier (yugi deck)
Kelbek x2
Pitch black warwolf x2
Dark blade
Drillago
Invader of the throne
Manju of the ten thousand hands
Wall of illusion
Homunculus the alchemic being
Sonic bird
Mad dog of darkness
Nobleman eater bug
Swarm of scarabs
Gemini elf
Hade-Hane
The creator incarnate
Soul tiger

Spell: 10

Dark snake syndrome
Mystical space typhoon
Malevolent nuzzler
Premature burial
Black luster ritual
Dark hole
Change of heart
Swords of revealing light
Axe of despair
Diffrent dimension capsule

Traps: 10

Ring of destruction
Trap hole x2
Magic cylinder
Spirit barrier
Cemetry bomb
Barrel behind the door
The spell absorbing life
Waboku
Spellbinding circle

She wanted a dark magician deck now it has turned to the creator.
Any thoughts..........

get rid of kelbeks for zolgas to get lp higher and maybe put in a gagagigo in place of homoculus