-2 Witch's Apprentice (the atk boost is not really needed)
-2 Plasma Zone (same reason)
-2 Enemy Controller (not really necessary, imo)

+1 Scientist (hey, you can get it with Apprentice Magician, right?)
+1 Breaker (he'll be great buddies with that Apprentice Magician)
+1 Night Assailant
+1 Painful Choice (just for speed...the Assailants will like it too)
+1 Swords of Revealing Light (a bit of just-in-case stall power...plus your opponent will want to kill you for using this with MoF =P)
+1 Premature Burial (Mon Reinc isn't for everything, chap)

8.5/10.

I took many of your changes, Twelfth Faucet. however i dont have painful choice =\.

edit:

took out 2 sakuretsu for 2 CED's. abusing apprentice magician is fun ^^.

oh and Twelfth Faucet, why is Breaker good friends with Apprentice?