\\Relinquished//
//Relinquished\\
//Black Luster Soldier-Envoy of the Beginning\\
\\Chaos Sorcerer//
//Jinzo\\
//Blade Knight\\
\\Blade Knight//
//Magician of Faith\\
\\Magician of Faith//
//Sangan\\
\\Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer//
//Manju of Ten-Thousand Hands\\
\\Manju of Ten-Thousand Hands//
//D.D. Warrior Lady\\
\\Exiled Force//
//Tribe Infecting Virus\\
\\Cyber Jar//
//Sinister Serpant\\

\\Pot of Greed//
//Graceful Charity\\
\\Lightning Vortex//
//Heavy Storm\\
\\Mystical Space Typhoon//
//Premature Burial\\
\\Snatch Steal//
//Creature Swap\\
\\Creature Swap//
//Swords of Revealing Light\\
\\Scapegoat//
//Scapegoat\\
\\Metamorphosis//
//Metamorphosis\\
\\Black Illusion Ritual//
//Black Illusion Ritual\\

\\Ring of Destruction//
//Magic Cylinder\\
\\Call of the Haunted//
//Torrential Tribute\\
\\Mirror Force//
//Dust Tornado\\

Basically this is a Relinquished deck with Chaos support. Only played a little so far, usually does good, but my starting hand can easily get clogged with special summons and such. Just need a way to fix that. Any help will be returned. Thanks.

Well, I'll start at the bottom with your traps. First, with them, I'd drop Cylinder and Dust Tornado, for something along the lines of Bottomless Trap Hole, Sakuretsu Armor, or Compulsory Evacuation Device.

Then, I'd drop Lightning Vortex. Yes, Vortex. I find it to be a horrible card. A Smashing Ground works out better, especially with all the Field Control you get with the Relinquished/Thousand-Eyes theme. A hand discard for something like that is not good, especially in a Ritual Deck.

Next, since I can't see anything wrong off-hand in your monster line-up, I'll ask where your Fusion Deck is. Since I don't see it, I'll assume you have the normal complement of TER.

Anyway, very good, very original chaos. I'll give it a 10/10 for concept and originality, and an 8.5/10 for playability. It looks really good; keep it up.

Also, please check out mine--the link is in my sig.

Later.

C;mon peoples, need some more posts.

Kinda freaky. just noticed theres another ritual deck with almost the same name as mine. Didnt mean to steal that, sorry!

Wow, I was waiting for you to notice. =P

Take out one Creature Swap for Ceasefire or The Spell Absorbing Life to help you flip annoying little monsters and take them with Relinquished. It looks okay. 8/10.

*cough*obstain from bump posting! :D*cough*