I dont really know how to make a good deck so all R/F are welcome.

-2 Soul Absorbing Bone Tower
-2 Vampire Lady

Too many monsters...

+ Brain Control
+ Heavy Storm
+ Scapegoat
+ United We Stand

More magic...

-2 Mystic Plasma Zone
+2 Bottomless Trap Hole

MPZ will help your opponent too much...

lease r/f the deck in my sig

Ok i dont like any of the other edits but i did add a heavy storm.

OK, I'm not exactly the best Zombie Duelist in the world, but what I know I picked up from the best: desolutionist and darkmagwalt.

From them I picked up the following:

- Most low-level Zombies are crap, so use more generic cards like Exiled Force and Morphing Jar

- Card Of Safe Return isn't as good as it sounds and will mostly just end up being an awful top-deck

- Call Of The Mummy also isn't really needed, and Book Of Life is horrible in 3s

Along with tons of other stuff, but these are 3 of the most important.

Here are my suggestions:

-1 V. Lord - 3 are too many, because you're more likely to end up with multiples in your hand. Different if you're running Vampire Genesis
-1 Patrician - Personal preference, I don't like it much
-3 Regenerating Mummy - just plain crap
-2 Soul Absorbing Bone Tower - require their own set-up to be truely effective
-2 Vampire Lady - Again, crap
-1 Spirit Reaper - 2 should be enough

+1 Ryu Kokki - Hands down, the second best Zombie in the game. Period.
+1 Morphing Jar - clears up your hand and dumps stuff for BoL.
+1 Tribe-Infecting Virus - just plain good
+1 D.D. Warrior Lady - for dealing with threats that the big Zombies can't handle.

=17 Monsters, a much more managable number.

-1 Book Of Life - This in your opening hand = bad
-1 Creature Swap - 1 should be enough
-1 Mystic Plasma Zone
-1 Card Of Safe Return - both of these are awful top-decks

+1 Mystical Space Typhoon - why is it not there?
+2 Nobleman Of Crossout - just plain useful
+2 Smashing Ground - see above
+1 Enemy Controller - switch Jinzo to defense and run all over him. Laugh.
+1 Lightning Vortex - Zap!

=16 Spells. Standard stuff, really.

-2 Waboku

+2 Sakuretsu Armor
+1 Torrential Tribute
+2 Dust Tornado

=7 Traps. Again, pretty standard stuff.

That would be a much better Zombie deck, with the theme basically directed towards crushing your opponent into a nice, juicy pulp.

thats sumthing along the line of what i was going to suuggest..

i dont feel like doing the entire -1/ +1 thing, so ill give it a new look, u should be taking advantagee of the 3 vampire lords and vampire genesis, when he was released he was declarred to have been "broken" if vampire ever was in 3's...then it seemed like a dream..but now it can actually b done...

1-Vampire Genesis
3-Vampire Lord
3-Pyramid Turtle
3-Spirit Reaper
2-Vampire Lady
1-Exiled Force
1-Morphing Jar
1-Soul abrsorbing Bone Tower
1-Sangan

16 monsters

2-Nobleman of Crossout
2-Book of Life
1-Card Destruction
1-Lightning Vortex
1-Crreature swap
1-Snatch Steal/ Brain control
1-Mystical space typhoon
1-Heeavy storm
1-Smashing Ground
1-Call of the Mummy
1-Book of Moon
1-United we Stand
1-Pot of greed
1-Confiscation

16-spells

1-Bottomless Trap Hole
1-Call of the Hauntted
1-Sakuretsu Armor
1-Waboku
1-Torrential Tribute
1-Ordeal of a Traveler
2-Dust Tornado

8 traps



good luck with it... itll be beetter with genesis and vampire at 3 now...