Um..........This is my deck. Can you rate it? i dont have alot of good cards......
Monster:
Harpie Lady1(2)
Harpie Lady2(1)
Harpie Lady Sisters(2)
Harpies Pet Dragon(2)
Dancing Fairy(1)
Princess Of Tsurugi(1)
Wynn The Wind Charmer(1)
Amazoness Swords Woman(1)
Amazoness Chain Master(1)
Witch Of The Black Forest(1)
Mask Of Darkness(1)

Spells:
Premature Burial(1)
Harpies Hunting Ground(3)
Change Of Heart(1)
Elegant Egotist(3)
Triangle Ecstasy Spark(2)
Monster Reborn(1)
Soul Exchange(1)
Malevolent Nuzzler(2)
Spell Repoduction(1)
Offerings To The Doomed(1)
Harpies Feather Duster(2)

Trap:
Fairys Hand Mirror(2)
Life Absorbing Machine(1)
Robbin Goblin(1)
Mirror Wall(2)
Shift(1)
Solemn Wishes(1)
Spiritual Wind Art-Miyabi(1)
Aqua Chorus(1)

I know I have more than 40 cards listed, but i put those up there in case anyone tells me to remove some.

alright i would just look at my harpie deck and get some ideas(ignore the fact that i have 6 harpies.)your harpies are fine.(again ignore MY harpies)the main thing i want you to do is to:
- harpies hunting ground
+terraforming

really speeds up the deck by taking out 2 cards from your deck.

also can you r/f the other deck in the sig? :cheeky:

Quote:also can you r/f the other deck in the sig?
What does this mean?
And What Is Terraforming?
And isnt it against the rules to have six harpies? It would be cool if you could but....

Oh cool, A Harpie Deck. This deck type is a personal favorite of mine. Well my suggestions would be for a Traditional Version.

-2 Harpie's Pet Dragon (Not very competitive in Trad format with Chaos galavanting about)
+2 Enraged Battle Ox (You can give your Harpies an ability to trample when hes on the field)

-1 Dancing Fairy (It may be good to have lifepoint gain but this cards DEF strength ain't going to let it hold out for long)
-1 Wynn the Wind Charmer (Not many people run Wind attribute monsters in Traditional format, so shes kind of next to useless in this deck)

+2 Magician of Faith (You'll need all of the spell recycling you can get in this format)

Note: Mask of Darkness is a great choice in your deck, this suggestion may be almost godly impossible to do, but find a Mirror Force. It great to take out your opponents monsters, then later on when your in trouble set Mask of Darkness facedown defence mode, your opponent attacks him, activate Mirror Force, destroying all of his attack position monsters and then on your turn flip the Mask face up to regain Mirror Force to use over agian.

-2 Mirror Wall

+1 Mirror Force
+1 Torrential Tribute (Dang good agianst BLS-Envoy and Chaos Emperor Dragon)

-1 Aqua Chorus
-1 Spirit Wind Art- Miyaba (You dont want to sacrice to many monsters in this format needlessly)
-1 Solemn Wishes
-1 Shift
-1 Life Absorbing Machine

+1 Robbin Goblin
+3 Sakuretsu Armor
+1 Call of the Haunted (This card is basically a staple for almost any deck)

-1 Harpies Feather Duster (I beleave your only aloud on in the format)
+1 Raigeki (Almost impossible to aquire but it would work well in this deck)

?? Offerings to the Doomed (Im alittle both ways on this card)

+1 Pot of Greed

-1 Soul Exchange
-2 Malevolent Nuzzler

+2 Axe of Despair (Better to Have an extra 1000 ATK)
+1 Graceful Charity

I hope this help alittle, do your best in this format, and foremost Good Luck

@@@Tyrant Dragon 06@@@

I cant remove mirror wall, its my favorite card...........besides the harpies of course, and its so shiny......... :eek: AND do you know how hard it is to get good cards like that where i live? i live in the middle of knowwhere. the olny reason i have half the cards i do is because i special order them. and if i remove soul exchange, how can i summon my pet dragon?

well you know how there is cards called harpie lady 1, harpie lady 2, and harpie lady 3?well their names are treated as harpie lady soit was my first time using harpies so i had accidentally put:

harpie lady 3(3)
harpie lady 2(1)
harpie lady 1(2)


see thats what i had meant.

also r/f the deck in the sig, it just means :
can you rate/fix the deck in the signature?
a signatue is the at the bottom where it says in big letters archfiends rock!!!!under there it says "its just archfiends now!!"click on it and my deck should pop up.

Ok, but how do i do that? Srry, im stupid. It took me forever to figure out how to do the forum thingie.

BTW, should i take out the harpie lady ones and two and just put in three cyber harpie. it occured to me just a moment ago to do just that. I think its a good idea. What do you all think?

Try to fit in rising air current that can power up your harpies.

Ill just remove my three harpies hunting grounds. i dont really need them anyhow. i had rising air current in there before anyway.