well, i finally traded up from traditional to advanced. please tell me what you see wrong with it and give me any advice on how to fix it. also, a rating wouldnt hurt, either.

Effect: 21

1x Silent Magician LV8
1x Dark Magician of Chaos
1x Jinzo
2x Chaos Command Magician
1x Cybernetic Magician
2x Chaos Sorcerer
1x Breaker the Magical Warrior
3x Skilled Dark Magician
1x Silent Magician LV4
2x Royal Magical Library
3x Magical Plant Mandragola
2x Old Vindictive Magician
1x Magician of Faith

Monster: 4

3x Dark Magician
1x Mystical Elf

Spell: 11

1x Dark Magic Attack
1x Dedication through Light and Darkness
1x Diffusion Wave-Motion
1x Dimension Fusion
1x Mage Power
1x Nobleman of Crossout
1x Premature Burial
1x Spell Absorption
1x Spell Economics
1x Swords of Revealing Light
1x United we Stand

Traps: 7

2x Bottomless Trap Hole
1x Call of the Haunted
1x Magic Cylinder
1x Negate Attack
2x Pitch-Black Power Stone

thanks to all who help me with this deck.

[quote=Dark Ruler0789]well, i finally traded up from traditional to advanced. please tell me what you see wrong with it and give me any advice on how to fix it. also, a rating wouldnt hurt, either.

Effect: 21

1x Dark Magician of Chaos
1x Jinzo
3xApprentice Magician
1x D.d warroir Lady
2x Chaos Sorcerer
1x Breaker the Magical Warrior
3x Skilled Dark Magician
2x Magical Merchant
2x Royal Magical Library
2x Magical Plant Mandragola
2x Old Vindictive Magician
1x Magician of Faith

Monster: 4

2x Dark Magician
1x Sorcerer of Dark Magic

Spell: 11

1x Dark Magic Attack
1x Dark Hole
1x Diffusion Wave-Motion
1x Heavy Storm
1x Mage Power
1x Nobleman of Crossout
1x Premature Burial
2x Smashing Ground
1x Swords of Revealing Light
1x United we Stand

Traps: 7

2x Bottomless Trap Hole
1x Call of the Haunted
2x Sakuretsu Armour
2x Pitch-Black Power Stone

I tried to keep numbers and theme consistant . hope it works better than before

well, i like the idea, but i dont think that would cut it. im trying to stay purely spellcaster with Jinzo as the odd card out. besides, i made this deck only this morning, and it worked pretty good against the other decks, except i always drew tribute monsters. maybe if some can help me with this little problem.

monsters
dark magician x2
dark magician of chaos
skilled dark magician x3
exiled force
cyber jar
double coston
apprentice magician x3
sangan
magician of faith
old vindictive magician
tuskiyomi
brekaer the magical warrior

spells
reasoning
heavy storm
dark hole
snatch steal
dark magic atack
toon table of contents x3(easy summoning of dark magican,thins deck,and get a monster to the hand all at the same time)
premature burial
noblemen of crossout
smashing ground x2
my body as a shield
scapegoat
mystical space typhoon
brain control
swords of revealing light

traps
bottomless trap hole
waboku
call of the haunted
torrential tribute
magicians circle
royal decree

sidedeck
magicians circle
messanger of peace
des wombat
royal decree x2
mystic swordsman lv 2
reasoning
magical merchant
emergancy provisons
bottomless trap hole x2
kycoo the ghost destroyer
my body as a shield
royal oppresion
d.d warrior lady

i dunno just an idea for a dark magician deck,try it out you may like it

i think i might try that, father. thanks for the input. anyone else want to rate/fix this here deck?

if u want to use sorcere of dark magic the y not put in a dark magicain girl and a sages stone this will realy help u to get sorcere of dark magic onto the field quicker even if u summon dark magician girl in the same turn cause it iz a special summon fer sorcere of dark magic and it works but u have to wait until u get DMG, SG, an SDM in ur hand before u try it. it does work i've used it against many apponints but never needed his help now that i have horus black flame dragon Lv8...

am i not getting it... or why the hell are you playing "toon table of contents"? you even don't have 1 Toon in your deck ?!!!! its there for nothing or am i misstakeN?

?????????????????????????????????????? what? too many errors for me to understand. just kidding. i use to run DMG, but she took up to much room for me to run what i need to run.

Toon, i didnt say i had a toon table of contents. that was fathers suggestion.

... it changes nothing that i'm not getting it why to play toon table of contents in a DM deck !

*gg*

Toon-Master

it allow you to bring out Dm in 1 turn and thins out the deck.

It looks like is has potential but you are a little on the heavy side of monsters. Just a thought, do you really need Mystical Elf or the Plants? 8/10.

actually toon table of contents can't ! in Toon Table of Contents is writtne NOWHERE "DARK MAGICIAN" sorry .... perhaps you're talkingabout a different card but this one does not what you're talking about

well, demon, the magical plants keep putting on spell counters on cards that i could really like to put spell counters on. say for instance, and this has happened. i have breaker on the field, with the 2 power stones. i would use up breakers first spell counter. then i would flip magical plant to put another spell counter on breaker and 1 on each of the power stones. i would use that one up, and move a spell counter from power stone onto breaker. i would keep on doing this, potentially taking out 4 set spell/traps on their side of the field. its just awsome how that can really work. the mystical elf is for defence against other monsters.

toon table of content adds max counters to Skilled dark in 1 turn