Rate/Fix and I'll try to return the favor.

Creatures 20

Newdoria
Mobius
Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys
mystic tomato
blade knight
Sangan
Tsukuyomi
Exiled force
spirit reaper
spirit reaper
spirit reaper
Drillroid
Ninja Grandmaster Sasuke
Magician of Faith
Magician of Faith
Magical Merchant
Dark Mimic LV 1
Mystic Swordsman LV2
Breaker the magician warrior
Different Dimension Warrior Lady


Nobleman of crossout
Nobleman of crossout
Smashing Ground
Smashing Ground
Graceful Charity
fissure
Premature Burial
Book of Moon
Heavy Storm
Snatch Steal
Mystical
Scapegoat


Call of the Haunted
Torrential Tribute
Dust Tornado
Dust Tornado
Sakuretsu Armor
Sakuretsu Armor
Sakuretsu Armor
Magic Drain

Can someone please rate/fix this deck???


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yeah I will
-2 Apprentice
+2 DDA


8/10


You'll like SD8= wind

Normally I would, but I don't have assailants lol. Anyone else?

k, then 2 more slate warriors

taste the panckaes of defeat

lol don't have those either XD




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Drillroid over Mystic Swordsman lv 2.

Smashing Ground over Fissure.

Toss in some Enraged Battle Ox - maybe one over Exarion.

forget the third smashing (maybe side deck it). add in nobleman of extermination in its place. please look at one of my decks in my sig.

I was thinking about NoE, thanks for the fix.

DECK UPADATED

BUMP weeeeeeeeeeeee

It looks pretty interesting. Maybe drop the Fissure for a Reinforcements of the army. You've got 4 warriors, so that might help in a tough spot.

A more aggressive tech idea would be Mirage Dragons over DD Dragons.

-2 Different Dimension Dragon
+2 Mirage Dragon

Zombyra looks like was tossed in. If you haven't, maybe try an Old Vindictive instead?

-1 Zombyra
+1 Old Vindictive Magician

You should, when you get it:

-1 Sakuretsu Armor
+1 Mirror Force

Other than that, your deck looks great. Awesome job.

Brain Control
not so much apprentice magician
Some better attackers and your good

Updated....That was the old version you two rated lol. I haven't gotten a chance to change it.

Truely doesn't look all that bad. I only got a couple ideas which are up to you. I know the idea was old but don't put in the extermination, with your traps your more likely to hit a sak and have it hurt you just as if not more than your opponent.

Take out

Reaper x1 (2 should be more than enough to stall)
Sakuretsu Armor x1 (Mirror Force was suggested but since you don't have that yet)
Magical Merchant x1 (Without a pot to help recover what you lose 1 should be good.)
Mystic Swordsman (Your choice, but I think exiled and 2 NoC's should do the job)
Fissure (not as helpful against a reaper in the battle phase)

Try out

Mystic Tomato x1 (add the second and it gives you a little more choice as to what to grab or defend against another atk with less pain than the reaper)
Bottomless x1 (For the sakuretsu, sak is useless when Mobius and Breaker hit it, and those stupid Cyber Dragon's)
Hand of Nephys x1 (optional, if you can get the phoenix out without this then ignore it.)
Rush Recklessly x1 (kills reaper in battle, powers up one of your own if needed, worth trying)
Chaos Sorcerer x1 (I don't like adding him to decks, but with your ratio, it's worth a shot if you want.)

Other than that it looks pretty good. Good luck to you with it.

Eric