Booyah

Monsters: 24

Pyramid Turtle 2
Chainsaw Insect 2
Ancient Gear Beast 1
Magician of Faith 1
Cyber Dragon 1
Opticlops 1
Goblin Attack Force 1
Sangan 1
Steamroid 1
Vorse Raider 1
Night Assailant 1
Spirit Reaper 1
Newdoria 1
Kuriboh 1
Yomi Ship 1
Vampire Lord 1
Ryu Kokki 1
Mystic Swordsman LV2 1
Despair from the Dark 1
Twin Headed Behemoth 1
Penguin Soldier 1
D.D. Warrior Lady 1

Spell cards: 9

Smashing Ground 2
Premature Burial 1
MST 1
Creature Swap 1
Monster Reincarnation 1
Lightning Vortex 1
Pot of Greed 1
Swords of Revealing Light 1

Trap Cards: 13

Threatening Roar 2
Dust Tornado 1
Draining Shield 1
Compulsory Evacuation Device 1
Sakuretsu Armor 1
Bottomless Trap Hole 1
Magic Cylinder 1
Jar of Greed 1
Hidden Book of Spell 1
Call of the Haunted 1
Negate Attack 1
Spellbinding Circle 1

Tell me what you think
:D

um.....um.....um..... This deck seems pretty good and wierd. I'll give it a 7.0 or 8.0/10

One important question that I want to ask you is what is the theme of the deck. Is it beatdown or something else? and you have waaaaaaay too many traps. Jinzo/Royal Decree will shut them down.

Let's start with cuts.

Chainsaw Insect and despair from the Dark should go. Along with Opticlops, Anceint Gear Beast (I still like Ha Des more...), Pot of Greed (banned), Draining Shield, Magic Cylinder, Hidden Book of Spell, Negate Attack, and Spellbinding Circle.

Every card listed there is either an inherit disadvantage or has a better alternative. Force example, Negate Attack has the same timing as Mirror Force, and Mirror Force is better than negate attack in almost every situation. Spellbinding Circle is not as great as Nightmare Wheel or, sometimes, Shadow Spell.

I'd recommend building a side deck also.

On that note, Des Lacooda is a decent Zombie, I'd like to see more flip effects in here and more spell cards would be a good idea.

WoW, you need some help for this deck.

Here is my suggestion for this deck.


Ryu Kokki
Ryu Kokki
Vampire Lord
Vampire Lord
Cyber Dragon
Cyber Dragon
Cyber Dragon

Giant Rat
Giant Rat
Injection Fairy Lily
Exiled Force
Exiled Force
Pyramid Turtle
Pyramid Turtle
Spirit Reaper
Breaker the Magical Warrior
DD Warrior Lady
Sangan
Magician of Faith
Treeborn Frog

The monster lineup help consist of the varients of Rat Toolbox and Zombie Control.

Spells

Book of Life
Book of Life
Enemy Controller
Enemy Controller
Pot of Avarice
Graceful Charity
Heavy Storm
Mystical Space Typhoon
Premature Burial
Creature Swap
Creature Swap
Scapegoat
Smashing Ground
Smashing Ground


Traps

Deck Devestation Virus
Bottemless Trap Hole
Bottemless Trap Hole
Bottemless Trap Hole
Ring of Destruction
Torrential Tribute
Mirror Force

Side Deck depends on the people who you played.


Hopes this help your thought process for this deck.

to amh755: ty :D

to Monkeyman666: the traps work well for me, almost everyone i duel has either a jinzo or royal decree in their deck, and i usually run right through them. the theme is a "Run Through" type.

to scapegoatboy69: i could take those out, but it would murder my deck you see, but when i can find cards to replace them, i would replace them.

spell: i'm missing a few of the cards named

1 Vampire Lord
2 Cyber Dragon's
2 Book of Life's
2 Enemy Controller's
1 Injection Fairy Lilly
2 Exiled Force
1 Breaker the Magical Warrior
1 Pot of Avarice

to tell the truth, thats what im trying to do. but untill i get the cards i need for it, im forced to use the cards i have in there, thanks for the suggestion.