Alright guy's for the first time aim going to enter in a shonen jump tournament which is to be held in AZ I really need help with my deck to make it tourney worthy, so please feel free to be as brutaly honest as possible..
Thanx you
Iran

MONSTERS:26
1 - Blade Knight
2 - Blade Knight
3 - Command Knight
4 - Command Knight
5 - Cyber Dragon
6 - Cyber Dragon
7 - D. D. Warrior Lady
8 - Dark Magician Of Chaos
9 - Elemental Hero Wildheart
10 - Elemental Hero Wildheart
11 - Enraged Battle Ox
12 - Enraged Battle Ox
13 - Exiled Force
14 - Exiled Force
15 - Gravekeeper's Spy
16 - Gravekeeper's Spy
17 - Injection Fairy Lily
18 - Jinzo
19 - Marauding Captain
20 - Marauding Captain
21 - Mobius the Frost Monarch
22 - Neo-Spacian Grand Mole
23 - Old Vindictive Magician
24 - Old Vindictive Magician
25 - Snipe Hunter
26 - Zaborg the Thunder Monarch

MAGIC: 12
27 - Big Bang Shot
28 - Big Bang Shot
29 - Book of Moon
30 - Card Trader
31 - Enemy Controller
32 - Heavy Storm
33 - Lightning Vortex
34 - Mystical Space Typhoon
35 - Pot of Avarice
36 - Premature Burial
37 - Snatch Steal
38 - Swords of Revealing Light

TRAP: 7
39 - Call Of The Haunted
40 - Magic Cylinder
41 - Mirror Force
42 - Negate Attack
43 - Sakuretsu Armor
44 - Sakuretsu Armor
45 - Torrential Tribute
SIDE DECK
46- Dark Ruler Ha Des
47- Goblin Elite Attack Force
48 - Goblin Elite Attack Force
49 - Kaiser Glider
50 - Night Assailant
51 - Penguin Soldier
52 - Slate Warrior
53 - Slate Warrior
54 - Slate Warrior
55 - Snipe Hunter
56 - Spirit Reaper
57 - Scapegoat
58 - Smashing Ground
59 - Royal Decree
60 - Waboku

I think 45 is a good number but for warrior which needs to be fast you do need less cards
For m/t's I would take out your negate attack because it really is not a good card in most senses and there are better alternatives
And I would take out both your big bang shots
i would replace your big bangs for 2 hammer shots or smashing grounds or fissures
In 95% of situations destroying a monster will be much more useful then powering up one of your own.
Card trader/ lighting vortex/magical cylinders gotta go for
2 reinforcement of the armies and 1 warrior returning alive
2 absolute invaluable cards in a warrior deck
So the m/t line up is looking pretty good
and as of now you have 44 cards

So we need to work on the monsters
Old vindictive magician x2
enraged battle ox x2
Dark magician of Chaos
blade knight x2
snipe hunter
gotta go here.
the ox is just completely random
The magicians will be unnecessary in a little bit
DMOC is just too big and your tributes are nice at 3
Blade knights just aren't all that and don't synergize with card's I'm putting in
Snipe hunter will eat away at your oh so valuable hand which will eat itself away soon enough
You need 3x giant rats
With this baby you can search out your exiled forces/wildhearts/lily/grandmole
All very useful important cards can be picked up with this card
And one more card to add is 1 slate warrior from your side to main deck

And I think your deck is looking alot better.
When running warriors deck thinning is a must.