my dark world deck!!

level 7 or higher:
2x Despair from the dark
1x raviel, lord of phantasms

level 5 to 6:
2x sillva, warlord of dark world
2x goldd, wu-lord of dark world

level 4 and under:
3x kahkki, guerrilla of dark world
3x zure, night of dark world
2x beige, vanguard of dark world
3x gren, tacticion of dark world
1x brow , huntsman of dark world
2x night assailant
1x dd trainer
1x la jinn the mystical genie of the lamp

spell cards:
1x card of safe return
2x dark world lightning
3x gateway to dark world
1x monster reincarnation
1x mystic plasma zone
1x gracefull charity
1x cheerfull coffin
1x card destruction
1x tribute to the doomed

trap cards:
1x curse of the aging
2x the forcses of darkness
1x bark of the dark ruler
1x pheonix wing wind blast
1x forced ceasfire
1x raigeki beak
3x dark deal



thats my deck, i know some of the cards in there are banned its just im not going to enter any tournements i just play with my freinds so theres no point in taking out the baned cards.

but please could you rate this deck out of 10, and note it is still unfinished THANKS EVERYONE!!!! :D

even though you're playing for fun:

- 2x Despair
You won't be getting his effect if you discard it.
- 1x Raviel
There are better cards for a Dark World deck than this

+ 2x Cyber Dragon
Useful in almost every deck
+ 1x Goldd
An extra Goldd is good

- 3x Zure
A 1800 vanilla that can't be special summoned like most of the DW monsters
+ 3x Brron
He helps with discarding Goldd, Silvaa, Beiige, Broww and the other two
- 3x Gren
He's better for side deck
+ 1x Beiige
+ 1x DD Warrior Lady
+ 1x Spirit Reaper
An extra special summonable monster, DDWL is good against recruiters and frog, and Reaper can help stall

- 1x Night Assailant
Only one can be used even in traditional format
+ 1x Sangan
Self-explainable

- DD Trainer
- La Jinn
Vanilla monsters.......
+ Morphing Jar
Dark World decks must have this card
+Treeborn Frog
Can help summon Goldd or Silvaa if you can't discard them

- 1x Monster reincarnation
not that good anyway and discarding for it is a cost. Goldd, Silvaa, and the others won't be special summoned
- 1x Mystic Plasma Zone
Can be a dead draw
+ Card of Safe Return
+ DWL
DWL must be run in threes. A second Card of Safe Return can help.
- Tribute to the doomed
same reason as Monster reincarnation
- 2x Dark Deal
can often be a dead draw
+ 2x Creature Swap
lots of fun to be had with this card
+ Pot of Avarice
recycle your DW monsters for more ownage.

- curse of aging
losing 500 attack doesn't really do much
- Bark of Dark Ruler
Not really needed
+ 2x Sak Armor
self-explainable
- Forced Ceasefire
useless one turn card
+ Torrential Tribute
Way better
- 1x phoenix wing wind blast
+ Ring of Destruction
way better
- Raigeki Break
+ Mirror Force

trap cards:
2x the forcses of darkness
3x dark deal