Like I said, i've never been to a tourney before so i need any and all help possible. Help me make my deck really good.

so far i have (40 cards);


Monsters; (21)

3 cyber dragon
3 gene warped warwolf
1 marshmallon
1 Jinzo
3 nimble momonga
1 reflect bounder
1 d.d. warrior lady
3 slate warrior
1 spirit reaper
1 silent swordsman lvl 5
3 giant germ


Spells (12)
2 lightning vortex
1 mystical space typhoon
1 twister
1 premature burial
1 card destruction
1 heavy storm
1 swords of revealing light
2 card trader
1 graceful charity
1 double summon



Traps (7)
1 Mirror force
1 call of the haunted
1 torrential tribute
1 Sakuretsu armor
1 magic cylinder
1 waboku
1 draining shield

please help me out!!! if you leave a link, i'll take a look at yours

I have one question are you playing advanced format or traditional because graceful charity is banned in the advanced format.

ha........i like you casual Crber Dark deck better than this.....i have abolutly no idea what the theme to this deck is it looks like a beatdown.........then you trow in nible and germs...........

its all over the place!..................maybe try stickin to 1 theme............yeah that might work.

P.S. plz help/fix my deck...it may sound stupid but it really does work

-3 slate worrior
-1 silent swordsman
+2 mobius
+2 raiza or thestolas
- graceful-its banned
+ smashing ground

6.7/10

pick 1 theme. you had a beatdown going but nimbles and germs they are the wrong recruiters for a beatdown. They do belong in special decks though giant germ goes in Sky Scourge control and nimbles go in Green Baboon Beatdown.
and graceful charity is banned in advanced.

well like i said, i just threw this together, so why dont you help pick a theme for it and lets go from there.

HELLO? do any of you out there have any ideas?

Since you have 6 beatsicks in Cyber Dragon and Gene-Warped Warewolf lets go beatdown w/ monarchs for control. It should be self-explantory.

Mons:22
3 Cyber Dragon
3 Gene Warped Warewolf
1 Jinzo
1 Spirit Reaper
1 Reflector Bounder
3 Giant Germ
1 Sagan
1 Snipe Hunter
1 Treeborn Frog
3 Mystic Tomato
2 Raiza
2 Thestalos
1 D.D. Warrior Lady

spells:11
1 Brain Control
1 Smashing
1 Premature Burial
2 Lightning Vortex
1 Heavy Storm
1 Foolish Burial
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Twister
2 Enemy Controller

Traps:7
1 Mirror Force
2 Sakurestu Armor
1 Magic Cylinder
1 Torrential Tribute
1 Waboku
1 Draining Shield

You can run any 4 monarchs of your choice ideally @ 2 piece but thats arguably the best monarch duo right now. Your ideal dump w/ foolish is of course frog but jinzo will do if needed. You are welcome to change this in any way you like.

Mons
3 Cyber Dragon
2 Gene Warped Warewolf
1 Jinzo
1 Spirit Reaper
1 Reflector Bounder
1 Snipe Hunter
1 Treeborn Frog
2 Raiza
2 Mobius
1 D.D. Warrior Lady

spells
1 Brain Control
1 Smashing ground
1 Premature Burial
2 Lightning Vortex
1 Heavy Storm
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Twister



Traps
1 Mirror Force
2 Sakurestu Armor
1 Magic Cylinder
1 Torrential Tribute
1 Waboku



I like this a little, what would u do to it?

looks good. side pulling the rugs and mei-koi master of barriers maybe solemn judgements and dark bribe to stop zombies from using Card of Safe Return and Book of Life.

anythin else people?

nah looks pretty good