This is my dark world themed deck. Im trying to work out the inconsistancy of the deck so any help would be appreciated.

Monsters 18:

3x Goldd
3x Silvva
2x Bronn
2x Broww
2x Gren
2x Kahkki
2x Beigge
1x Morphing Jar
1x Sand Moth

Spells 18:
3x Dark world lightening
3x Dark world Dealings
3x Gateway to the dark world
2x card of safe return
1x Card Destruction
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Fissure
1x Shield Crush
1x Swords of revealing light
1x premature burial
1x Heavy Storm

Traps 4:
1x Curse of Anubis
1x Forced Requisition
1x torrential tribute
1x Call of the haunted

I dont have a mirror force but I'd like to get that in when I can. Any other suggestions would be fantabydosey!
TA!

The only thing inconsistent with this deck is The Creator, from first glance.

He does NOT work with Dark World Monsters.

-1 The Creator
-1 Shield Crush

+1 The Forced Requistion(this way you discard and force them to discard as well the difference is you get a monster and 2 draws they get nothing thus one card gives you a +3 thats insane dont you agree?)
+1 Reign-Beaux(he's the dark world with a lightning vortex or heavy storm its your choice when you summon him through a discard) OR Breaker, the magical warrior if you dont have reign-beaux

don't use forced requisition it. i run dark world and when i used forced requisition it only helped increase the control i already had.

thats the point it does for DW what Treeborn Frog does for monarchs now granted its not a staple like Frog but it enhances the control and allows the deck to run with less problems because you've taken all the options from the hand. If you dont have a hand you cant win we all know that.

I guess the Creator doesn't work as it "sends" not discards a card? Is that an official ruling? That makes me a very sad individual!

There is a really good reason I dont run rainbow, he may have a good effect if my opponent makes me discard him but nothing if I do. In the whole time I have played dark world I have never had an opponent make me and I dont like to run many dark deals as it only effects normal spells.

With the creator having to be removed I am unsure of what to stick in there: I have the choice of Broww, Bronn, Beigge or sand moth I'm not sure which to pick or if there are any other monsters that work with the dark world theme. Any ideas guys?

I actually like the thought of one forced requisition and will give it a try. I mean the deck is pretty versatile it cat hurt to make it cover one more base. Like volcanic said if you have no hand you cant win!

I've edited the deck a bit. Ta guys.

Unfortunately it is an official ruling

i did the whole forced requisition in my DW deck b4, i was drawing and discarding like crazy, and had my opponent with no hand for the majority of the duel,

a buddy of mine runs necrovalley in his dw deck it shuts down alot of pc decks but its only a suggestion