Here is my revamped deck, any suggestions welcome


Monsters(17)

Black Luster Soldier Envoy Of The Beggining
Breaker the Magical Warrior
Don Zaloog
Spirit Reaper
Freed The Matchless General
Marauding Captain
Marauding Captain
Goblin Attack Force
Goblin Attack Force
D.D Warrior Lady
D.D Warrior Lady
Jinzo
Tribe Infecting Virus
Exiled Force
Command Knight
Blade Knight
Blade Knight

Spells [15]

The Warrior Returning Alive
Reinforcements of the Army
Reinforcements of the Army
Premature Burial
Pot of Greed
Painful Choice
Snatch Steal
Change of Heart
Monster Reincarnation
Mystical Space Typhoon
Enemy Controller
Creature Swap
Nobleman Of Crossout
Nobleman Of Crossout
Heavy Storm

Trap [8]

Call of the Haunted
Ring of Destruction
Torrential Tribute
Waboku
Waboku
Dust Tornado
Ceasefire
Royal Decree

ok, u have the right cards, but it could use a little work, try these

take out:
freed the matchless general
command knight
1 goblin attack force
the warrior returning alive(i think it sux, but it sux even more if u only have 1)
monster reincarnation
1 waboku
ceasefire
royal decre(very rare, but not tournament worthy, at least not in a warrior deck, only good in like horus based deck or negation decks)

add in:
another ddwl
another don zaloog
2 smashing grounds
book of moon
2 scapegoats
sakuretsu armor
sorl(very good with only 3 main m/t detruction cards, dust tornado doesnt count since not 2 many ppl use it, and if they do destroy it i count it as a freeby for me, u should never waste a m/t destruction on a sorl unless u r gonna do tons of dmg by doing so or win.)

there, that makes ur count 16-19-6, which is a little better than 17-15-8, i myslef play 15-20-5, but thats just me, i would also suggest takin out spirit reaper or 1 marauding(2 isnt good in a deck that u want 2 win with, i dont play ne) for a magical scientist, in my opinion, hes the perfect card for a warrior deck, because if i dont draw him in the first few turns, i use him and painful dump, thinning out my deck of cards that i cant use and adding a dark 2 my graveyard at the same time, but only if u have the right fusions for him, and this is totally up 2 u.

after fixes i give it a 8.5/10(i dont like maraudings and jinzo in a bls deck, but i also dont wanna make ur deck exactly like mine, so i just changed it a little)

o yea and also, id take out 1 marauding for sinister serpent, its the best painful choice feed out there, and just 2 let u in on this, if u dont have a main purpose for painful when u draw it(like bls or ced) then use it 2 dump off bad top decks, like if u still have confy or forceful in ur deck dump them(i no u dont play them but just hypothectially), my standard painful, even when i have bls is,

sinister
blade knight
scapegoat(i have 2 so 1 is ok 2 dump)
forceful(i hate confy i think its the worst card that ppl still use)
scientist or kycoo

usually they give me sinister, which gives me a light and a dark, and forceful is now gone, which sux as a topdeck, usless they have yata, but if i were playing traditional id have delinquent in there also, so...

well gl man, incase u just skipped 2 the bottom, id suggest reading it all, but the rating was 8.5/10 again.

wow, thats alot of writing there. j/k, thanks for all the info that u gave for my deck. i do have most of that stuff in my side deck. i need something to put in there for don zaloog, i've gotten tired of that card. any more suggestions

okay, which warrior deck is better


Monsters(17)

Black Luster Soldier Envoy Of The Beggining
Breaker the Magical Warrior
Don Zaloog
Spirit Reaper
Freed The Matchless General
Marauding Captain
Marauding Captain
Goblin Attack Force
Goblin Attack Force
D.D Warrior Lady
D.D Warrior Lady
Jinzo
Tribe Infecting Virus
Exiled Force
Command Knight
Blade Knight
Blade Knight

Spells [15]

The Warrior Returning Alive
Reinforcements of the Army
Reinforcements of the Army
Premature Burial
Pot of Greed
Painful Choice
Snatch Steal
Change of Heart
Monster Reincarnation
Mystical Space Typhoon
Enemy Controller
Creature Swap
Nobleman Of Crossout
Nobleman Of Crossout
Heavy Storm

Trap [8]

Call of the Haunted
Ring of Destruction
Torrential Tribute
Waboku
Waboku
Dust Tornado
Ceasefire
Royal Decree

Monsters(17)


Breaker the Magical Warrior
Marauding Captain
Marauding Captain
Goblin Attack Force
D.D Warrior Lady
D.D Assailant
Jinzo
Tribe Infecting Virus
Exiled Force
Mystic Swordsman Lv-4
Mystic Swordsman Lv-4
Mystic Swordsman Lv-6
Horus Lv-4
Horus Lv-6
Horus Lv-6
Horus Lv-8
Fiber Jar

Spells [15]

Reinforcements of the Army
Premature Burial
Pot of Greed
Painful Choice
Snatch Steal
Change of Heart
Monster Reincarnation
Monster Reincarnation
Mystical Space Typhoon
Nobleman Of Crossout
Card Destruction
Heavy Storm
Level Up
Level Up
Level Up
Reload


Trap [8]

Call of the Haunted
Ring of Destruction
Torrential Tribute
Waboku
Waboku
Ceasefire
Royal Decree

Your first deck is MUCH better than the second, to be honest. Freed, when it comes down to the topdecking match, is a great card to have on the field because he feeds your hand and can't be Change of Heart-ed or Snatch Stolen. Don Zaloog is also an invaluable card in a warrior deck. If I were you, I'd take out the Spirit Reaper and add in a second one. You may also wanna think about a couple of more light and dark monsters, like Mataza the Zapper (amazing card by itself, even better with a Command Knight or two), a second Command Knight (1900 defense isn't to be laughed at), or maybe even a Dark Blade or Getsu Fuhma if you're running into Fiend problems. As for light monsters, you may add in a random Freed the Brave Wanderer or a random Magician of Faith. You may also wanna get a hold of a few more Warrior Returning Alive to bring back your Ex Force three or four times. Also, I don't quite see the point of Creature Swap. I don't see you having any monsters you'd like to give away, except for a random defense-position GAF. Be careful with the Tribe-Infecting Virus; if it gets on your opponent's side of the field, say goodbye to any chance of winning you ever had. I personally don't like running cards in a deck that could end up being my worst nightmare. One Nobleman of Crossout should be more than enough to fix your problems; I'd replace the other with a Giant Trunade. If you have more problems with face-down monsters, I'd add in a random Mystic Swordsman Lv. 4 and use the Marauding Captain to get him out and ready to kill. I'd also take out the Royal Decree and Ceasefire in favor of Magic Jammer and/or Magic Drain. I mean, are face-down monsters really THAT much of an issue? And that Monster Reincarnation really would be better suited as a Warrior Returning Alive. You're gonna have a tough enough time as is with Warriors keeping a decent-sized hand. So why not recur your monsters from the graveyard for free?

Just my two cents.

i just threw that second deck together just for kicks and giggles. i want to find something to replace royal decree with

does any1 else have some suggestions for me.
it would be greatly appreciated

does any1 else have some suggestions for me.
it would be greatly appreciated